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  • Alesana

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    I love this! Such a superb piece of writing! I thoroughly enjoyed it from beginning to end :)
    January 10th, 2011 at 01:14am
  • Safety Net

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    That was beautifully written, even though I wasn't really 100% sure about what you mean by 'ghosts in his mouth.' It was a pleasure to read. Your a great writer ^-^
    October 25th, 2010 at 11:46pm
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