Little Girl. - Comments

this was cute. In my world Zack and Sierra are gay though, but would still kinda be like this (where he would father Sierra's child ya know). And the last line totally is possible for Sierra to say :D Great job!

This is so beautiful.
:,)
You did great at writing this.

-kayt

Ohhh this was adoooorraaaable!
You even had me crying at the end :')
sdhgpietiphwpidgh ab I have no words for this, it's just. GAAH it's great.
Alex and Jack are soooooo cute :)
More stories like this, yeah?

Okay, the opening makes my heart melt. It’s just so cute and I love how proud they both are of their little girl. It’s just too adorable and the crying, oh God the crying is so amazing!

Alex painting the nursery and being amazing like that is just too amazing and precious. I love it, love it, love it! And how he comments on the fact the little girl has Sierra’s hair and shizzle.

Oooo! Are Jack and Alex together then? ‘Cause that comment about Alex being cute makes my heart pound quite happily. The hand prints on the wall makes me smile. That’s the kind of thing I want to do myself when I have a child one day.

I love how you push it forward to when she’s six months old and trying to talk. That made me grin ‘cause she’s trying to talk and everything. Too adorable.

Can I just say, I don’t like Cassadee at all. Don’t like her as a person, a character or as a musician. But, it makes me laugh how uneasy she is by this.

Awww! Her trying to walk and falling and being so damn adorable! This is too fucking cute! And then how she’s asleep at two years old curled under his arm. Fucking sweet as cherry pie!

I love how the wedding sounds so beautiful yet, you don’t really describe it. It’s pretty awesome that you can do that. Alex and Jack are getting married? Amazing!

And then she’s thirteen and in tears and her daddy’s there to be all “I love you and you’re perfect and great”. I’m jealous =3

And after the graduation bit is so damn amazing! How her parents still think she’s amazing as the day she was born. Love it.

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Okay, sorry that I’ve basically written a comment full of how cute and adorable this story is but, I couldn’t help it. I really loved it and thought it was extremely well written and perfect.

You’re an amazing author babe :)
Well done

omg that was so perfect and cute and awww<333

OH SAVANNAH <3333333333
That was perfect oh my God <3 <3 <3
Zack as a Daddy and Rian with a little boy.
I'm surprised there was encounters with boys mentioned with Shiloh
But n'aww it's such an adorable fic ^_____^
Exactly how I imagined it :3
(I admit, I did squee when I imagined Zack asleep in a wedding suit :D)
You're an amazing writer and it's so so so awesome a fic :D