Tension - Comments

usually i don't like fiction stories but this one is really good, one of my favourites *-* good job <3

i really loved it, it was one of the best fics i've ever read. good jog. <3<3 btw do you guys have any bottom brian fics?

Oh my!! I adore this *blissmode on*

This just...this literally was...wow.
Seriously...wow.

This is Writer D, and I must admit - I had the biggest boner ever.
Just sayin'.
Writer A liked it too, I think.
She went to her room halfway through it, and I wonder if she's in there masturbating.
Elohel, amirite?
It was good; though there was a bit of cheese with the plot of it, but other than that and a few spelling/grammar mistakes it turned me on.
Keep writin' shit, bro.

Ily, girl. Happyface.

Haha yesss! That was amazing and I can't wait! Thank god you didn't make Brian out to be a twilight werewolf though :P and I was just like, "OH NOOO!" when Zacky told him that he should've listened to Matt XD And the kinky was verrryyy nice indeed haha. Can't wait for the sequel!

YUMMMY
I LOVED IT!
CANT WAIT FOR MORE OR THE SEQUEL!!

I usually don't like so much storys which the characters become lovers and say "I love you" so fast. But I liked it. Since it is a special situation, I guess Brian's heart, after three hundred years, have instincts no one else could. But I'm wondering why he was looking for Zacky. It was left unanswered, huh? He was searching for the right person for him or he was looking for Zacky for an especific reason? Does Zacky have something special? It left me sooo curious! I want the sequel so bad!! Please, release that soon!

That sex scene was definitely drool worthy. XD I loved it, hun! :D I can't wait for the sequel!

This is interesting and I need to know what happens! : D So second part, plz? 8-----)

Amazing story! :D

Haha this is amazing! I love your writing style, it's so unique! I loved teh tension between Brian and Matt, like i was litterally feeling it, i was like haha! I was hoping to see the confrontation this chapter, but we'll just have to wait and see :P I love this and I can't wait for it more!

LOVE!
cant wait to read more and i cant wait for the sequel either ^^D

Wooah! Interesting! I do think Zacky shouldn't leave with some stranger, but since I know the stranger is Brian I can only think that thing are going to get better, huh? Awesome story, as usual. Can't wait to read more! Please, update soon! And I'm hoping for the sequel already XD

i really like this and I can't wait to read more

Yay! ^_^ It's amazing so far! I love it! :D More soon!