The Bird and the Map - Comments

This chapter was so beautifully written and yet completely heart-breaking at the same time. It's amazing how much you just keeps pulling me in. And I seriously felt my heart swell up at the way Alice was there for Peter. It was touching, and I felt both their loneliness and need to have the other to cling to. This whole story is just breath-taking.

Can I just say I love your writing style? I can't pinpoint what it is exactly put it has a very calming affect on me. I also love the way you portray the characters; easy to relate to from their original timeless pieces and just as enjoyable in your own writing. All around, I just love it. The descriptions were beautiful and moving and I ached for poor lonely Peter. And I'm excited for more. Seriously, this is amazing. <3

Molly this is beautiful!
I cannot wait to read more. <3