Teach Me How to Play - Comments

Seriously, reiterating what I said before - too adorable. Kyle and Caleb aren't even my favourites (I totally have a soft spot for JCook, as you call him, not gonna lie) but your characters just make me flail. Kyle's nickname for Caleb! Caleb talking about his guitar like his baby! Playful hitting! Boys being boys and me generally wanting to hug the screen.

/totally appropriate reaction

I like this. It tells a lot in just 195 words and you wrote details and speech in this, whereas most drabbles/short stories wouldn't contain speech, so this is good. This is mostly about music and playing instruments, which is always a happy topic to talk about. You set the scene and the mood, and have made the readers think about what the two guys are saying to each other. It's not not detailed, or too detailed, just detailed; in the middle, if you get what I mean. However, I saw a few punctuation errors on this, but other than that it's all good, and you've done a great job. :3

awww i think they like each other....
its so cute....