Take Me, I Am The Drug. - Comments

  • Jay188

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    i just got done reading the first chapter, and i have to say im really impressed. your writing description is immense! i really feel connected to the characters. ill be subscribing fa sho <3
    July 28th, 2008 at 08:14pm
  • grandma eater.

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    I'm so glad you liked it ! : )
    and im sorry for killing her lmfao, that sounds weird, but i just thought it would be a good turn of events X)
    thanks again for reading, please suggest it to others, :tehe: In Love
    July 17th, 2008 at 08:55pm
  • Whisperer

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    SO MUCH FOR MANDY AND MICHAEL GETTING IT ON, AYE!?
    I cant believe you killed her
    *sob*
    July 17th, 2008 at 11:19am
  • college dropout

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    I just read the whole thing.
    This was so good, the ending was so sad I nearly cried. But it was still amazing
    June 22nd, 2008 at 05:24pm
  • Exquisite.

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    Duude, total unexpected turn of story!
    I'm kind of sad this story is over, it was totally different to the average Frerard on here and it made for a good read. : ]

    So thank you for sharing with us && I'll be looking out to more of your stuff. : ]]
    <3
    May 29th, 2008 at 11:05am
  • illy Pumpkin

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    Wow I didn't see that coming...

    and it almost made me cry...

    *hugs Micheal*
    May 28th, 2008 at 01:38am
  • Feeling Failure

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    Oh. My...

    I was listening to 'Forever' by Chris Brown while I read the update and right when his 'eyes followed the rope to the light fixture' Chris Brown went, "I won't let you fall, let you fal, let you fall..."

    My mouth was... is... gaping-

    I can't believe she--- Micheal--- dead--- hung--- what...!?!

    I'll never sleep again...

    (on the bright side, now that she's out of the way I can have Micheal)

    But still!

    That was so good, but so, so, so... SAD!!!

    *Chris Brown sstill in background*

    Gah... You write so good, but that was so fricken sad.
    May 26th, 2008 at 10:26pm
  • grandma eater.

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    thanks so much . :tehe:
    I'm flattered that you loved it all, I feel honored to have such nice commenters. X)
    Thanks again, Im so glad you loved it. ♥ In Love
    May 26th, 2008 at 02:16am
  • ella vator.

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    that was amazing.
    May 25th, 2008 at 10:19pm
  • asdgafdh

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    by the way,.....

    My favorite story ever just ended =[
    May 25th, 2008 at 02:10am
  • asdgafdh

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    Oh god the tears.
    -sits quietly with tears rolling down face-
    Even in death, she was beautiful.

    Her skin seemed paler than ever, her lips still moist.

    She could've been so much more, so much more than this dead body.

    These three sentences.
    oh my god.

    =[
    i am sad its over though =\
    May 25th, 2008 at 02:08am
  • frank.

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    I definitely think you managed to let the end chapter be the climax. Smiley
    Congrats on that, 'cause many people fail to write good endings.
    But seriously, that was beautifully written, no one else could have done it any better.
    It was amazing and brilliant and it got chills running down my spine.

    Huuuuuuuuge props to you for this story.
    It was brilliant.
    :arms:
    May 24th, 2008 at 10:33pm
  • Xtine_L

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    I just noticed that its kind of like the book Candy, by Kevin Brooks. Did you get your ideas from it?
    May 24th, 2008 at 02:36am
  • SaintEMber

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    ahhhhhhhh! this is REALLY good! i love it. are you finished with it? i didn't read all the chapters yet, only up to four. its awesome though. good job!
    May 14th, 2008 at 10:33pm
  • frank.

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    Wow shit, Micheal's so sweet.

    It's insane what drugs do to people.
    Not only to Mandy, but to Micheal too.
    Poor him, only trying to be kind to Mandy.

    I'm sad this story has to come to an end, but I understand perfectly that it has to. :cute:

    I love this story, you're talented. :arms:

    PAGE CLAIM Smiley
    May 13th, 2008 at 06:10pm
  • grandma eater.

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    I love you all so much for reading! I'm glad you love it all, : ) ♥
    May 7th, 2008 at 11:35pm
  • Feeling Failure

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    Well, well!

    The chapter was amazing, but I am very, very, very sad that it's near the end.

    But, as a fellow author, what must be done must be done so I will support you.

    I love Micheal so flipping much I just wanna tacklehug him.

    The update was phenomenal, you are phenomenal, update soon!!!
    May 6th, 2008 at 02:32am
  • astro.zombie.dee

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    awesome update!
    May 2nd, 2008 at 12:10am
  • frank.

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    Chapter seven was just plain weird.
    Haha, I mean, that Hubby dude is just plain weird. He scares the shit out of me.

    And then chapter eight. Holy fucking shit. It was like Saw in written form (mayeb because I watch too many horror flicks, but still... shiiiiit. :shock:)
    I was seriously at the very edge of my seat. :omfg:
    I totally wasnt' biting my nails at that, by the way. Shifty

    Chapter nine was pretty damn ass cute. Micheal's really sweet, maybe Mandy really just needs less additude. He'd be a good friend, to say the least. :cute:

    Chapter ten was just plain frightening. I adore the way you can make every chapter vary in the feelings it creates. I nearly felt the same urge as Mandy did, and I nearly felt as if I were throwing things across that room as well.
    Maybe I'm just insane. :tehe: :XD

    Chapter eleven;
    WOW. The last person I expected that to be was her dad. I even completely forgot that she had parents. :tehe:
    I'm so happy Monty's okay! I was scared something bad had happened to him :cheese: Cry

    Woah. Her dad is a dickhead. :shock: At first I thought he loved her and still cared or something, but I guess I was wrong. :shock:

    And then the make out was just like... making everything better again.
    I totally squealed when she kissed him. I just thought it was because she was losing her mind a bit, but maybe she does mean it. :cute: :tehe:

    :lmfao That Micheal kid with his cokes :XD

    I love being able to catch up. :con:
    And I use way too many smileys :XD
    May 1st, 2008 at 04:18pm
  • asdgafdh

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    aye aye aye!
    really great!
    update soon?!
    May 1st, 2008 at 03:21pm