i just got done reading the first chapter, and i have to say im really impressed. your writing description is immense! i really feel connected to the characters. ill be subscribing fa sho <3
I'm so glad you liked it ! : ) and im sorry for killing her lmfao, that sounds weird, but i just thought it would be a good turn of events X) thanks again for reading, please suggest it to others, :tehe:
Duude, total unexpected turn of story! I'm kind of sad this story is over, it was totally different to the average Frerard on here and it made for a good read. : ]
So thank you for sharing with us && I'll be looking out to more of your stuff. : ]] <3
I was listening to 'Forever' by Chris Brown while I read the update and right when his 'eyes followed the rope to the light fixture' Chris Brown went, "I won't let you fall, let you fal, let you fall..."
My mouth was... is... gaping-
I can't believe she--- Micheal--- dead--- hung--- what...!?!
I'll never sleep again...
(on the bright side, now that she's out of the way I can have Micheal)
But still!
That was so good, but so, so, so... SAD!!!
*Chris Brown sstill in background*
Gah... You write so good, but that was so fricken sad.
I definitely think you managed to let the end chapter be the climax. Congrats on that, 'cause many people fail to write good endings. But seriously, that was beautifully written, no one else could have done it any better. It was amazing and brilliant and it got chills running down my spine.
Huuuuuuuuge props to you for this story. It was brilliant. :arms:
ahhhhhhhh! this is REALLY good! i love it. are you finished with it? i didn't read all the chapters yet, only up to four. its awesome though. good job!
Chapter seven was just plain weird. Haha, I mean, that Hubby dude is just plain weird. He scares the shit out of me.
And then chapter eight. Holy fucking shit. It was like Saw in written form (mayeb because I watch too many horror flicks, but still... shiiiiit. :shock:) I was seriously at the very edge of my seat. :omfg: I totally wasnt' biting my nails at that, by the way.
Chapter nine was pretty damn ass cute. Micheal's really sweet, maybe Mandy really just needs less additude. He'd be a good friend, to say the least. :cute:
Chapter ten was just plain frightening. I adore the way you can make every chapter vary in the feelings it creates. I nearly felt the same urge as Mandy did, and I nearly felt as if I were throwing things across that room as well. Maybe I'm just insane. :tehe: :XD
Chapter eleven; WOW. The last person I expected that to be was her dad. I even completely forgot that she had parents. :tehe: I'm so happy Monty's okay! I was scared something bad had happened to him :cheese:
Woah. Her dad is a dickhead. :shock: At first I thought he loved her and still cared or something, but I guess I was wrong. :shock:
And then the make out was just like... making everything better again. I totally squealed when she kissed him. I just thought it was because she was losing her mind a bit, but maybe she does mean it. :cute: :tehe:
:lmfao That Micheal kid with his cokes :XD
I love being able to catch up. :con: And I use way too many smileys :XD