Darling, - Comments

Some how I missed your last update. :) Wonderful job. I am truely excited for your next update. :)

This is so exciting seeing the story come to this point! You've done such a masterful job of moving into the inception plot line while still keeping it your own. Can't wait to see what the rest will hold! <3

Poor, poor Arthur. He's so tragic! Nobody but Eames sees his pain! I like your transition to the Cobol job, but I think Arthur would have realized a while before that Dom was keeping Mal alive in his mind. He was so hyper-aware of all things Cobb in the movie. Eames though, Eames I can understand. Arthur would have tried his very hardest not to think about Eames. I will say one thing, please bring our poor Arthur some relief soon. He has barely any happiness in his life. =(

Wonderful update. I love the love/hate relationship that Eames and Arthur have.

Also, I like the name Jack. Simple, normal, and completely unremarkable. Perfect! It doesn't fit Eames' personality at all! It's a complete FOIL of who Eames is. I guess, in that direction you could go with a whole section of Eames' back-story. Perhaps, through his life he started as Jack and transitioned into Eames, or Jack is Eames on the inside, or I'm getting carried away with this.

I almost wish I could've seen Eames reaction when he notices that Arthur still carries a gun. Would he have that sad expression? Does Eames feel for Arthur's predicament?

I love how you transition into the current relationship Arthur and Eames have. It's smooth and understandable without being abrupt or shallow. Eames is throwing Arthur sad looks? Is this story coming together? Ugh, it has been too long and you have kept me waiting. You simply must update soon or my spontaneous combustion is on your conscious!

Jack?!! His name is Jack? No wonder he just goes by Eames. The name Jack just doesn't fit him the way Eames does. Poor Arthur, stuck in denial. I don't really blame him though. Eames isn't the most reliable lover with his constant disappearing act. Hope there's more soon! <3

Oh shit, I like how that went down. lol :)

Happy Belated Birthday!!!!!
I actually guessed that Eames is her dad several chapters ago. It wasn't that it was obvious just that he was the only real option. Glad to have my suspicions confirmed though. Can't wait to see what happens next! <3

Eeek! I so saw that coming at the end of that chapter! I knew as soon as the guy laughed. I loved the twist. :) And Happy Belated Birthday.

Happy Birthday!

Haha, I love how you crash Arthur and Eames back together and throwing in a daughter? Hmm, does Eames have a past we're not aware of? Oh, update soon! I love this story.

Also, poor, poor Arthur. Always sticking with Cobb until the very end. Are you going to bring in how Mal interferes with the dreams? Maybe throw in a twist with how the dream Mal and Arthur's memories of Mal clash?

happay birthday.

mind fuckkk.
oh and happy birthday!

:( I like Eames.

For real, I love Arthur freaking out. Though I will say one bit of criticism. Maybe its just me but I think Arthur would be more concerned that he was kissing Eames in front of Mal's grave more than the fact that the grave was Mal's. I think the grave part would anger him more than the fact that its Mal's grave. Get my meaning? Like, I know he loves her, but I don't think he'd have this mega of a freak out about it.

I don't know, that's just how I feel.

Seriously? I was tired when I read this, now I'm tired and depressed. Thanks, I'm going to go bawl my eyes out in a corner somewhere now.

But honestly, lovely writing.

I was pretty much on the verge of tears while I read that, It was great, and I am really excited to see how things turn out.

This story is great! Im lovin it. And I cant believe you left me with another cliff hanger. :) All in all, your stories are great.

That's not nice.
That's not nice at all.
Poor Mal.

aww, I knew this was coming but still the way you wrote it made me sad. it almost made me cry :C oh and sorry to hear about your shittastic mood. I hope you feel better!