That is so adorable, i really like it :)
December 30th, 2010 at 03:35am
This is a really short story, only 437 words (which is not negative in anyway!) and i think that you got it all, if you get me. The emotions and i love the way you used your quote and it was so cute and romantic how he proposed on the place where they first met, i "awwed" so many times reading this and i read it over and over. Fun Fact; You used my favorite name for a girl; Hayley, haha :D
But i think you did a really great job with this so thumbs up for you :D (Y)