First off, thanks for joining my contest! *hug* it means a lot to mee.
I love the layout; i think the simple light brown color works with the picture's coloring.
So far i'm liking the plot ;D lord knows i love my incest. and blake is friggin' adorable! There were a few little errors; nothing too bad. like, there were a couple of obviously intentional spelling mistakes. so i wont hold that against you too much xD
There were a couple capitalization errors; a few fragments. meh. nothin' too bad.
Overall, an excellent entry.
I'll comment on all the chapters, just so you know. <3
First off, thanks for joining my contest! *hug* it means a lot to mee.
I love the layout; i think the simple light brown color works with the picture's coloring.
So far i'm liking the plot ;D lord knows i love my incest. and blake is friggin' adorable!
There were a few little errors; nothing too bad. like, there were a couple of obviously intentional spelling mistakes. so i wont hold that against you too much xD
There were a couple capitalization errors; a few fragments. meh. nothin' too bad.
Overall, an excellent entry.
I'll comment on all the chapters, just so you know. <3