We Had to Put This to You - Comments

  • C V.D P

    C V.D P (200)

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    Even though the layout is blocky, it fits well.

    First paragraph and boom, I'm all ready in love with it. It's just so... good.

    It's repetitive but it works and it's so harsh and thought provoking. I just love this. It's so...

    I don't even have the words to describe how awesome this is.
    May 1st, 2011 at 11:46pm
  • ignite this angel.

    ignite this angel. (100)

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    Everything she said is pretty much right.
    I really have nothing more to say, than what's already been said. This is amazing.

    Good job :)
    November 13th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • the apex predator;;

    the apex predator;; (150)

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    This is...amazing.

    It's so thought-provoking. I love that. The wording is pretty much flawless and it had me in almost a trance. It made me wonder what the thing was that was talking and at the end I totally understood and it made the whole thing make sense. I love how you delved into something like that and wrote an entire story where a rumor was...well, I can't say personified because cancer isn't a person, but...transmogrified, I guess. Turned from one thing into another. I don't know, my words are failing me. XD Anyway, this was a stunning oneshot and I know it's oversaid and overdone but I honestly cannot believe there are not any comments on this. The only explanation I could even think about is that people saw it didn't have girls banging band members and turned back which is a real shame because stuff like this drives me wild. It's almost like stream of consciousness, which I adore. You keep writing like this and you have my respect. :)
    November 3rd, 2010 at 05:02pm