Good That Is Good - Comments

I remember reading this a long, long time ago. I remember commenting too, but I have no idea where it went...maybe you deleted the story. Anyway, this story always stays vivid in my mind, because it makes so much damn sense. Just the way that man talks, his muses, everything he speaks of, it clicks with me and I totally get it. I can see Chemistry with these two and while it's strong, I can tell indeed that he does favor his smoke over a lot of other things. This was so special and you did a great job on it, seriously.

"You know coffee is considered a drug?" A man's voice said from behind her.

Simple and common mistake..."A" should not be capitalized, since "a man's voice" is who said the dialogue.

"It's exactly that reasoning that's gonna kill you someday, James." She said, frowning at him.

Do not capitalize the "S" in "she".

Go through, fix those little errors...there's a lot of 'em. <3 Just remember that rule, though. ^

This is beyond what I'd expect from any writer on Mibba. It's brilliant. I swear, I'm constantly being surprised with beautiful writing, but this is just...gah. Wonderful.

Don't you ever stop. <3

Ryan

This starts of so nicely - I love the comparison of the tune and her mood to imply impatience. The dialogue's just so well-written and witty and interesting to read; It made me love character of James instantly. I also like that we don't know for definate his relationship with Delilah even once it ends.Everything the two said was philosophical and wonderfully thought provoking. I really enjoyed reading it:)

I love the fact that this one shot was mostly dialogue with a good amount of description thrown in to add some flavor to this. The conversation between the two characters was lovely, and downright beautiful. Both characters, with their habits and what they said seemed so real. This was really amazing!

This was really, really amazing. Like everyone else has pointed out, your dialouge is absolutely incredible! I really felt like I was reading an excerpt out of a play or a movie. It was so good. <3

The layout was amazing too, but it didn't compare at all to the amazingness of the actual story. ;)

Great job!

This story could have been totally description-less with just dialogue and still have been good, that's how amazing your dialogue is.

I'm out of other words.. Man. That was epic.

I loved this, it was written very well :)
I liked their conversation as well, it was interesting. You write dialogue perfectly :)

This is adorably cute and sweet. Your imagery is great, and the banner is gorgeous.
Loved it. The ending was perfect, too.
<3

Okay, I loved the opening line "Smooth, manicured fingernails tapped impatiently on the checkerboard tablecloth, a quick tune that matched the owner of the fingers mood.".
Just wow, that really blew me away, it was an amazing way to open the chapter.
It sort of had a 50s or 60s theme to it, I dunno, maybe the photo?
Overall, it's an amazing piece of work.
<3

I really loved this. Definately a good that is good :) Great job :)

I really enjoyed this. Even though it was just a conversation, it reminded me of dialogue from a movie and it was written very well. I really liked James' character and it was very true, the four categories. I'm proud to be the first comment. xD