I really liked this. :] I agree with Delightful Syn, it added to it that it was almost like a flashback instead of just a play of events. Plus I could like hear him talking in my head, which was weird, but good. :] Lol. Great job!
I have to say that the whole concept here was amazing. I loved how Zacky spoke in an overview, how it was almost as if he was trying to rationalize what had happened in his mind and to Gena. Great one shot.