Bad Impulses - Comments

  • mrsmshadz

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    I was starting to read this until I read, a man is not supposed to like another man?? Seriously??
    August 10th, 2015 at 09:15am
  • AvyD

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    You guys are awesome thanks for reading and commenting!!! :D I'm so glad you loved it!!
    November 5th, 2010 at 06:51am
  • atrocious

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    Great entry!!
    November 4th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • D. Dixon

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    I really liked this. :] I agree with Delightful Syn, it added to it that it was almost like a flashback instead of just a play of events. Plus I could like hear him talking in my head, which was weird, but good. :] Lol. Great job!
    November 4th, 2010 at 03:02am
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    I have to say that the whole concept here was amazing. I loved how Zacky spoke in an overview, how it was almost as if he was trying to rationalize what had happened in his mind and to Gena. Great one shot.
    November 2nd, 2010 at 06:00pm