Start a Fire - Comments

Oh man.

I love this.

Pleasepleasecondsiderwritingafollowupandi'llmarryyou.
<3

nobody can deny a fuck from Shadows now can they? (I certainly wouldnt) XD
VERY shexeh smut! XD ^_^

Well that was most definitely one of THE hottest Macky's I've ever read! Can't wait to read some more! :)

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layout; pretty pretty pretty <3 Zacky and Matt is a new pairing for me. :D

Oh, that was amazing. I loved it so much. I loved Zacky's asshole-ish denial and how Matt worked hard to prove his love to Zacky. The plot was brilliant and your writing amazing. The way Zacky trusts Matt was great, reinforced again and again throughout the two-shot was ..I don't know what it was but it was definately good. I liked the whole friendship play throughout & Zacky's denial. Matt was a real honey and a teddy bear in this and I love cuddly!Matt, but he was more than that, he was hot and sexy in this. I loved your writing and the detail.

Amazing work. :D

*jaw drops, no words are being formed, only gibberish is falling from lips*
omfg!

Oh my, I thought I commented this already. It was just. . . amazing from beginning to finish. I LOVED it.

O_O That was...HOT. Lol. Like, reallllly really hot. I love this a lot. The detail was amazing and you're great at writing sex scenes. :] You should write more. Hehe. Awesome jobbb.

Holy fuckkkk. I loved this! It was amazing! Damn. :D Great job!

wtf?! i'm like in love with it and freaked out at the same time...i would call it rape, but zack did enjoy it A LOT.

HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!
SERIOUSLY!!!!!?????
WHY????????

XD i loved it! i cant think of anythin haha, i want a SEQUEL!! please x

I loved this! But how can you leave it like that! I want to know what happens! Ohmygod!

I really, really, loved this. It's so much different from anything else. I'm still shocked.

Good lord, my favorite pairing. I love this. Haha.

Okay, so I realize I just commented but that was before I read chapter two.
Again, Not even Zacky could resist Matt.
At first I really did think Matt was going to rape him.
I started feeling sorry for Zacky...but that didn't last long. XD
I didn't expect that. <3

Not even Zacky could resist Matt. XD
I don't think anyone could.
<3

O_O. You left it there? YOU LEFT IT THERE????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! After all of that creepy yet amazingly sexy Mattie getting all up on Zacky and fucking his brains out and then Zacky not saying that he does not want a relatonship???? YOU LEFT IT THERE! Right now, I cannot form a sentence after that fucking amazing one-shot...

Because there should be a part 2 for this one.
The after-math xD

verrrrrryyyyyyy nice.
Matt and Zacky, very cool.
= )