Perfect Day - Comments

  • Tom Fletcher.

    Tom Fletcher. (155)

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    I loved this. Your narration captures the Master perfectly and effortlessly, and from the small amount of dialogue you give him you have the Doctor down too.

    This was amazing. I love your writing.
    January 4th, 2011 at 02:31pm
  • sectumsempra

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    "The Master has taken to evaluating his relationship with the Doctor in philosophical terms."

    You know what? I think this is literally the most perfect summary I have ever read from you. You should use it for all your stories. ;D

    I loved it all; the odds and ends of references, Jack, unkempt hair and all the madness. Yes that too.

    The Doctor swears, but only when the Master can hear and understand. I find this strangely endearing. You have the most perfectly imperfect kisses, too.

    You're too good to me. <3
    October 29th, 2010 at 08:44am
  • youth and whiskey.

    youth and whiskey. (415)

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    This is absolutely gorgeous. Everything about it is gorgeous. I fell in love with the first line and enjoyed reading this, most defiantly. This is something different than most of the stuff that I have read in quite awhile. I seriously couldn't make myself look away from the screen. Fantastic imagery and details were included. You've done a wonderful job. <3
    October 29th, 2010 at 12:45am