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  • BritishToTheCore

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    Keep it! I wanna know what happens now!
    July 29th, 2011 at 02:36am
  • saraNeon

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    i really love this story so its a definite keep. (:
    March 23rd, 2011 at 09:40pm
  • no-name-

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    I loved the update. Loved. Loved. LOVED!
    MORE SOOON.
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • no-name-

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    this is quite the interesting plot, and I'm enjoying the story.
    <3
    January 27th, 2011 at 05:12pm
  • party p o i s o n

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    I liked it, it's to the point and not too rushed ( though at one point it is slightly ) I like the plot :] I don't like Eryn yet, not sure why though xD
    Ones thing, in the first chapter you say he has electric blue eyes but then at lunch he has brown eyes Dx ?
    But It is really good!
    January 23rd, 2011 at 11:49pm
  • iron underneath;

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    You said to comment, and I am.

    I can barely read it its all scrunched up and....hard to read. I'd like to read it but I have dyslexia and terrible eye sight. I'd need my contacts in to read it better so maybe separate the paragraphs a bit?

    (read my story Kiss it Goodbye?)
    December 3rd, 2010 at 06:02am
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