Try Not to Lose You - Comments

This story is so damn sad....and amazing :)

I love this oneshot!
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
You should defiantly think about making this oneshot into s full length story!
It would be awesome if you did!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was very good. I liked it a lot. Yes, I saw the typos and stuff, which is fine since I know you were rushing and stuff. I'm really glad that you try so hard for these one shots because it shows in your work. When you write the summary for challenges three-five please place the chorus of the song in the summary. Also, send me a message so that I can give you the details about your first challenge prize!

i like it