Lol, my friend was complaining that it was just sex every 2 seconds. :D Her boyfriend read It and freaked out! Haha. I thought It was great though, and I loved how you describes every moment, I wouldn't know how to write something that good, but the whole story inself was awesome. Way to go.. :P
this is really awkward to read when my older brother and nephew are in the same room with me lol amazing story! i wonder if he really is that GREAT in real life (; Lucky Jamia(;