November 8th, 2010 at 09:07pm
Undisclosed Desires - Comments
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This is perfect. I love it, I love it. This chapter was so good. And you're an awesome writer. :)November 8th, 2010 at 08:57pm
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O= it's pretty awesome!!!!can't wait til next update!!!:)November 8th, 2010 at 08:35pm
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Amazing...loved it! <3November 8th, 2010 at 08:18pm
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love love love more soonNovember 8th, 2010 at 07:24pm
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a great update!!
As always =]
can't wait for more
<3 MicheleNovember 8th, 2010 at 06:58pm -
woo...i think i need a checkup after that. haha. love it!November 8th, 2010 at 06:55pm
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This is just...absolutely brilliant. i love your writing. Im sooooooo wanting more. {:November 8th, 2010 at 05:30pm
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Wow I can't believe that asswipe came back took the engagement ring he gave her.
Men can be so cruel!!!!!
But wow they both really know how to role play!
And that was one steamy sex between them both.
Well I am glad that she finally got back at Jay.November 8th, 2010 at 04:21pm -
hot damn
: DNovember 8th, 2010 at 01:05pm -
That was hot ;p
Goddamnnnnn sexyNovember 8th, 2010 at 12:57pm -
i really am enjoying this story!
can't wait for next chapter.November 8th, 2010 at 10:47am -
Damn, I wish he was my
doctor! Lol(:
Wow her ex is such a asshole
I would of sold the ring!November 8th, 2010 at 10:21am -
triple wow!!!!!!! i NEED MORE!!!!! this is tooo fucking good!!!!November 8th, 2010 at 09:50am
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Oh Jesus. YES!
(I'm a woman of little words haha)November 8th, 2010 at 09:18am -
omfg Brian could be my doctor any day LOL!
and he ex is still an ass but thats ok because after being with Brian
Eloise will for sure forget about him lol
i cant wait to see what happens next! =)November 8th, 2010 at 09:07am -
aw, yeaNovember 8th, 2010 at 08:54am
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They just got right on that, didn't they? Haha. She should be thankful Ray decided to come by before she managed to send Syn away. I bet these two will have some interesting times. They are certainly off to a good start! Loved it! =)November 8th, 2010 at 08:48am
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Ahh! I love these one shots that turn into a story! Can't wait for the next one :DNovember 6th, 2010 at 01:01am
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I'm loving this story already :D
Awe Matt and Mona are getting married..how cuteNovember 5th, 2010 at 11:00pm
HOW COULD SHE TRY TO TURN HIM DOWN IF HE LOOKED LIKE BRIAN? Lmao.
Anyway, good chapter. Update soon please!