I thought your sex scene was great. :-) this whole story is awesome! Lastly I have been loving stories where Tom is a gang-banger. Haha. You ate an awesome writer. :-) can't wait for more!
More soon!! I realized that my comp screwed up and I wasn't subscribed, and it took me a while to find this so I could subscribe for when you get to updating :) hehehe! I really do like this one
So I also have to finish my comment from last night because I didn't finish the whole story until today. You have an amazing way with words :) The sex scene was actually just right, so no worries :) But I truly do love this story and hope that you update some more :) I like that Mr. bad guy is falling for Scar :) They seem perfect. So yes, there is my lovely comment to you about how I think your story is so far. Again, AMAZING work :) Don't ever think less :)