Your Betrayal - Comments

Haner.Whore (100)

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I just started reading this and holy shit... I do believe an update is in order ;D

November 2nd, 2014 at 10:21am

Greenwolf7 (100)

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Please update soon xxxx

December 14th, 2013 at 08:31am

Greenwolf7 (100)

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Hope this will get updated xxx

October 31st, 2013 at 12:00am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Please update soon!

April 25th, 2013 at 09:12pm

wild rover (155)

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Please update, pretty please? I love the original twist you added with the mysterious blue-eyed Caleb. Can't wait to see where you go with this!

December 9th, 2011 at 05:31am

LifeisFiction (100)

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so I just reread all of this cause I had forgotten about this but I like it and now with this new element it gives it more of an edge I like it and hun it's not an epic fail

October 18th, 2011 at 06:21am

saint james. (160)

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Greag update. I wonder who Caleb is and what does he want with Lain and what did he mean Shadows will never find her. I can't wait for more please please please update very very soon!!

October 17th, 2011 at 10:52pm

synyster sykes (100)

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love it alot please update soon

October 17th, 2011 at 03:51pm

Its_RobynXo (100)

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Hmm really curious who this Caleb person is!
Hope Shadows finds her! <3

October 17th, 2011 at 08:29am

mck828 (100)

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great story cant wait to read more

October 17th, 2011 at 06:31am

mck828 (100)

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great story cant wait to read more

October 17th, 2011 at 06:30am

mck828 (100)

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great story cant wait to read more

October 17th, 2011 at 06:30am

lizicea7x (100)

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love it more soon please

October 17th, 2011 at 06:26am

Jorel Decker. (100)

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Are you ever going to update this again?

October 15th, 2011 at 04:42am

saint james. (160)

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I just found this story and I absoutely love it. I can't believe she was taken again but I wonder by who probably another gang but why would they want her? Why is she so important? I can't wait for more please please please update asap!!!

August 19th, 2011 at 05:05am

LifeisFiction (100)

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so apparently Lain is way more important I'm curious just what made her important; I like it, but I felt confused in certain parts.

August 1st, 2011 at 12:43pm

Goingtohell122 (100)

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Absolutely love this story! Keep up the great work ! :))
♥

July 18th, 2011 at 08:38pm

xfangscankillx (100)

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Really good update soon pleasex

July 13th, 2011 at 12:05pm

Its_RobynXo (100)

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Can't wait to see what happens! <3

June 5th, 2011 at 04:25am

Ello Ashleyy. (100)

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I love this story! I really hope the writers block shrivels up an dies.
Because I would really enjoy the chapters to follow.
It's a very interesting story and I would love to see what's going to happen.
Cliff hangers are no fun!

June 2nd, 2011 at 09:57am