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  • carelesswhispers

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    This is actually interesting! Normal kidnapping stories like this are lame, but this is awesome. :D
    June 2nd, 2011 at 08:07am
  • Cellophane Baby

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    Keep going! I love it.
    June 2nd, 2011 at 07:53am
  • bealiveplaydead

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    Update soon, yeah
    *subscribes*
    March 21st, 2011 at 01:49am
  • mArty_m3lla!

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    Loved iiiiit :3
    updateee?
    March 16th, 2011 at 10:35pm
  • seoulbunny

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    I WANT TO READ MORE!!!
    March 7th, 2011 at 08:09am
  • Rath

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    I love this!
    update soon please?!
    March 7th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • AvengedBaby1100

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    loved it. update soon!!!!
    February 23rd, 2011 at 05:19am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next! <3
    February 21st, 2011 at 07:05am
  • Schankster2012

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    Oh goodness! I loved it! But what I really want to know is why do they want her? And who are they?
    February 21st, 2011 at 03:58am
  • Lady9511

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    Why is she different than the other girls ?
    February 20th, 2011 at 06:37pm
  • slumflower

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    Ooooh!! Some Matt-sexy time, huh? Too bad Bri had to ruin it:( Loved the update, but I'm still wondering what's so important about her that has someone chasing for her?! Maybe she had an unknown ganglord father or something...=D
    February 20th, 2011 at 03:11pm
  • slumflower

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    Ooooh!! Some Matt-sexy time, huh? Too bad Bri had to ruin it:( Loved the update, but I'm still wondering what's so important about her that has someone chasing for her?! Maybe she had an unknown ganglord father or something...=D
    February 20th, 2011 at 03:11pm
  • SwaySwayBayBay.

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    UPATE SOON.
    LIKE NOW.
    February 20th, 2011 at 10:28am
  • Lady9511

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    Ahhhh why ate they after her. Please update soon
    January 31st, 2011 at 07:26am
  • slumflower

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    Love it so far!!! And i wonder why they're after her? And why Matt issuch a downer(not that the situation itself isn't)? And why is JimJam so freakin' awesome!!:D you should update.
    January 21st, 2011 at 02:11am
  • flyleaf64

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    I really love this story <3 update! :D
    January 12th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • Ninja_Bear

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    Really liking it so far, sounds like it's got a great story line :D
    January 10th, 2011 at 05:50am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Great update! <3
    January 8th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • Yeah?

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    i really like this, i hope he gets softer on her!
    January 6th, 2011 at 04:50am
  • Zacky Baker.

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    :O </3
    I feel bad for her.
    Jeez, If 'Shadows' kept calling me a slut I'd snap. I really would [x
    January 6th, 2011 at 04:40am
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