By Kismet - Comments

First off, your layout is very elegant, which adds on to the theme of the story. You have a very nice writing style and I liked your descriptions. I'm curious at to what happened to Georgia. This seems like an interesting story so far. Great job so far!

I am in looooooooove. I agree with who cried wolf, this is VERY intriguing. The way you write dialogue is so refreshing. I can always see and hear the conversation in my head perfectly. You're amazing at creating characters and making them real, and having them interact so dynamically. Really. SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

i can already see this is going to be amazing :)
please update soon !!

i like this... it's... intriguing.
update soon please :)

EEEE OMG YAY THEY MET!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!

And this chapter was written like, perfectly. You have SUCH a way with words. I felt like I was watching a movie more than reading, because I could see it all playing out in front of me! So vivid and descriptive and...unnnggg it like swallowed me whole!

AND AHHH when they talked!!! The dialogue!! I was like squealing! Hale was SO CUTE!!!!! ugh perfect!! And his internal monologue...unnfffff

You, my dear, are brilliantttttt <3

Have I ever told you how much I love this story? I LOVE IT A LOT, ugh you are so brilliant and you create these amazing characters that I care about, I feel like they're real, you areeee amazing and so is this story, PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOON <3

Yesh. Joo updated. :3

I. LOVE. THIS!!!!!!!!!!
yay! no, like seriously, this might be my favourite story of yours...maybe. I would definitely like to leave you a more detailed comment but I have a final tomorrow :3 so hopefully with the next chapter, or maybe I'll come back and tell you everything I loved about it at the end of this week, or something.
<3

OMG, You're posting it!!!!! Can't wait until tomorrow when I have time to read it!!!!!! :)

Oh wow I just finished and I really like the way you narrate and describe things. :) It's so... flowing and poetic at times.
Although, I'll confess I was a bit confused with what time this story was set in... but now it makes more sense. Aand I can't believe Hale just did that! :O Looking forward to more. :)

AHHH! IS THIS YOUR NANO? asdfkl; Please excuse me while I read it. :)
I'll post a proper comment when I'm done.

Update! YAY! Don't be blue bella! Eat ice cream and write some more. :D

^___^ Ack! Thank you! I'm sorry about the file not opening but I'm glad to see that you managed to produce another wonderful chapter despite losing most of your new work. Gah! Hale is soooo ful of himself! I just want to sucker punch him. D:

Oh, and maybe it doesn't have to be set in particularly any era; it's your own creation and thus it can be in a world of your choosing. When it comes to fiction time technicalities can be swept aside.

And sometimes I wonder if you are the older one with years upon years of writing experience.

I'm loving this, especially since her middle(?) name is Rosario. That's my mom's family's name. And I look more like her side of the family so I'm called a Rosario nearly all the time. :)

And I don't think I even have to say, but I've definitely subsribed. ;)

Yesss! First comment!

I'm enjoying the story so far and I'm looking forward to meeting Hale. :D By the way, is this set in modern time?

PS I have sent the banners in a message. Hope you like zem!