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  • summer's pathetic.

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    PLEASE,
    my dear dear best friend,
    UPDATE? :D
    May 6th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • kiram

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    great stuff so far can't wait for the next chapter!
    January 26th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • yixingxiu

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    please write more!!! i want to know what happens next!!!
    January 24th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • yixingxiu

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    i really want to know what happens! this is pretty good! ^.^
    January 13th, 2011 at 03:41am
  • Bonbonsables

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    Hey, writey more please, I wanna know what happens.
    November 25th, 2010 at 07:17pm
  • Bonbonsables

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    I really like this, you even have good grammar, spelling and punctuation and paragraphing. The plotline is slightly too fast for my liking but I love the material too. Keep writing please. :)
    October 30th, 2010 at 10:42pm
  • Bluenote

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    Keep going! It was just getting good.
    October 30th, 2010 at 02:16am
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