Ah, Katie! It was awesome! I'm so jealous of your amazing skillz. I like, uh, Oakley. I think that's his name? Anyway, that's such a cool name. And he seems like a real cool guy. I'm excited to see where this is going. <3
Prologue: i loved. Chapter one, amazing! i can really get the feel of this character, how he just accepts his life everyday because he has something to hope for in the future, (although obviously he hates all those that did him wrong). i feel so sorry for him i wish i could give him a load off cash! :(
i like it, it's different and new and "fresh". you inspire me! you have so many different ideas pouring out of you its amazing! i hope you do decide to continue with this story, i'd love to see where it goes :D x