AHHH!! I haven't commented in like forever but my fucking computer broke down for like a month and then I got a job. Haha, I've spent the last few weeks catching up on my storys and I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw how much I'd missed. lol. Anywho, the direction of this story has surprised the shit outta me and im still undecided about wether I like that or not. I geuss all great things make a person debate though so that must mean its good. ( : Can't wait to see what other twists and turns lie ahead. Promise though, I have not abandened this story! Can't wait till the next update (:
awwe, did you miss me? i saw the little part of Johnny being a garden gnome for la policia :D dont worry dearie, this and fiction will always have my comment adorning its beautiful comment pages! :D
ahhh dude! what those cops did is sooo illegal! they can't question her without a parent and it's a miranda right to know what you're being arrested for! grrrrrrrrr
Keep your spirits up girl i know you'll get through this :) Dont let anyone tell you your worthless. Show them you can be better than them and just live on girl. YOU GOT THIS!!! Hope things turn for the better, i know you can do it :)
i think either Johnny or Brian maybe mostly Brian since he is Brianna's sister should tell Laney why Jimmy freaked out on her so she understands that he doesnt want to lose her like he lost Brianna....any way can't wait for more
can i just say something: you are not worthless, you are a talented author, who captivates readers, also i loved the chapter, but jimmy needs to open up about her mom, i could see laney staying in her room, not doing anything, or leaving her room, and johnny going to talk to her, and telling her a few details of her mom, but im not sure who would be more upset, her, or her dad.... update soon :} i hope your writing streak continues!!
DUDE! I jumped when he said enough, god I was picturing it so clearly in my head. Though Laney being grounded for four months is fair for what she did (here in my house ohhh it'd be so much worse), she does need the explanation about Andy and Brianna. Damn Brian does need to loosen the leash on his son. Ay guey hows Deryck handling all of this? o.O O.o