Woah ... That was really quite good. I watched Skins and loved Maxxie, he is the boy there. He was my favourite. It would be interesting to see how you continued this, if you continue it. Please do :)
Originally this is a screenshot from one of my all time favorite TV shows known as Skins. The episode this is from isn’t one of my favorites but I wanted to put it in the contest to see how someone would interpret it.
I think this is wonderful. I could clearly picture Lucas and the beach in my mind. I don’t have a clear picture of the girl, but the story is focused on Lucas. If you made this a full length story, I would more than happily read this.
The last line is so powerful and so full of emotion. I couldn’t help but read it a few times. I’m subbing just in case you decide to continue on.