Underneath and Unexplored. - Comments

you should update more!!!
i really like this story and where its going <3

Duuuuude this is so amazing!
Like I just found it and after reading the first chapter I was like :O!
It's an awesome story & I can't wait to read more :)!

Update more plz!! I love this!!

Gah. Poor John!
My hearts breaking for him, even if he is acting like an asshole to everyone now.
He has his reasons.
I'm still in love with this story! :)

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I'm so glad you updated! :D
you had me lol'ing when he was having that mini-argument with himself.
this is such a strong chapter. <3

ahaha This really made me laugh. Especially the beginning. I love this!

How have I only just found this?!
you should update. :3 I love this so much.

Update update update...
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I think that I already love this

I'm absolutely infatuated with your writing already; please give me more?!

i like so far

So good! I like the switch between past and present; can't wait to find out what changed! Update soon, please?

loveee this story! xx cant wait to see what happens.

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This story is amazing.
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This is awsome! great story!

I like it and I'm very curious as to where your going to go with it?! :)

P.S The animated pictures at the end in your a/n are epic! I laughed so hard at the first one haha

The story is really nice! I can't wait to find out what happened between the two of them.

Never thought I'd be interested in a romance however this is really good. The story is genuinely interesting and you paint the scene really well. It feels real. Good work especially for your first story looking forward to reading more. Well done! Also it's good to see you're giving lots of feedback to your fans. I guess there ARE some nice people out there.