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  • kew_atl

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    More more more! Please! I wanna know what is gonna happen! I bet Alex is gonna be pissed!
    June 27th, 2011 at 09:54pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    What a SURPRISE! He couldn't run away eventually. Omg omg omg and now the band is coming for him. Omg I'm so so curious! What will happen next? Wahhh I'm so pumped for the next chapter!!
    Awww my heart was breaking when the officer asked Phoenix what is he doin here (or sg like that) and Phoenix said 'I just wanna go home' :( awww
    This story is like a drug for me pls update soon!
    June 27th, 2011 at 08:02pm
  • stallion duck.

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    I got 2 words for ya. Oh shit. Looking forward to the next chapter. Gonna be a good one. I can tell :))
    Update soon!
    June 27th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • Niall James Horan

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    MAJOR FACEPALM!
    I can't believe he got caught!
    I hope he manages to run away
    For good!
    Make alex feel all guilty and shit ;)
    Hehe
    :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • Niall James Horan

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    I love this story!
    It's really interesting
    and Alex needs to stop being a douche
    and Envy should just relax a little and ignore Alex
    (he should get along more with Zack) ;)
    haha I really hope you update this soon!
    <3
    June 25th, 2011 at 11:31pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    *gets boring
    TYPO for eva
    June 23rd, 2011 at 08:02pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    Great update! Drama lama! I was so shocked when I read that Phoenix actually hit Alex and on stage! But Alex deserved it, I think.. He went too far this time :/ he needs to realize what he has been doing to Phoenix is not right. He is being so effin childish.. Lol at the note Envy left for Alex HOBOHOBO
    I'm so curious where Envy will go now, and also I'm especially curious about what will the band do when they find out Phoenix is gone, also what will be Rians, Jacks, and Zacks reactions to this situation..
    Wahhh its like its like your story never gets bored, u always have new ideas and sg new to come up w it, so after a prequel and so many chapters I still enjoy it and excited about ur updates. That's really rare so congrats babe:)

    Ps yes yes yes I love love love Avenged Sevenfold<3
    June 23rd, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • kew_atl

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    This was so good! The last paragraph made me laugh. "Get raped by a hobo" hahahahaha. That was wonderful!
    And dirty work is awesome. At least I think it is. Totally worth it!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 09:03pm
  • stallion duck.

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    Just to let you know I almosted-ed shitted my pajamas when I saw this was updated. I hope to see more soon! And I could never throw shoes at you. That's for Alex the douchebaglex. :))
    June 22nd, 2011 at 06:59am
  • stallion duck.

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    D'awwwwww. This is what I'm here for. :)) I like making people feel good*insert sly thought here*.
    don't delete it. EVARRRRRR. I'd cry no WEEP.
    I loves you too.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 06:57am
  • yournightmareXO

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    Yayayayyyyyyy great update!
    So clever of you Phoenix! U got Alex's pin ;) oh well Alex is such a drama queen! I'm so curious about that Avery part. Why is he keep visiting the Barakats?
    Can't wait for Envys plan! I wonder how many troubles he gets into. And what will be Alex's reaction when he finally realizes that Phoenix is gone...
    Uareamazingok.
    June 10th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • kew_atl

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    I got so excited when I saw that you updated! I love this story so much! Update soon please!
    June 10th, 2011 at 03:06am
  • stallion duck.

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    your awesome :)
    xo.
    June 9th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • miss myself

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    Yayyyyyy updates :) The last chapter was really good even though it was a filler. Alex is being a totally PMSing loser but it is totally believable. I hope things all work out for Phoenix, I can't wait to see his adventures running away.
    Oh and I want to know what the deal is with Avery :)
    update again soon
    xxx
    June 9th, 2011 at 09:43am
  • adolescentglory

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    I just finished reading the prequel and this sequel, and I absolutely love this story<3
    I hate how much of an asshole Alex has turned into though... and I don't want Phoenix to be Gay for Zack! xD
    He should definitely be with Macy ;) or me..........
    June 8th, 2011 at 09:54pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    wohhh new chapters so fast, i can't even keep up w the fast updates :D
    but omg Alex i'm gonna go and fucking kick your fine ass. stop being an asshole.
    and Envy, poor guy when Alex said that "he would send him back" :( poor kiddo... im curious about Phoneix's plan...
    May 28th, 2011 at 07:44pm
  • kew_atl

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    Yay! I love this story! Alex is such an asshole! Update soon please!
    May 26th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • miss myself

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    yay!!! two updates in two days!!! And on my birthday!!!! :)
    I like Envy's plan, even though it is a little stupid and he'll prolly get himself killed. :(
    xxx
    May 26th, 2011 at 09:05am
  • stallion duck.

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    I fucking love you aand this story is just epic. I'd love it if you'd update 1 more time?
    Alex is a jackass.
    May 25th, 2011 at 11:14pm
  • yournightmareXO

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    omg just saw the new chapter!!! well, still so enjoyable :) i was like: "pls dont end this chapter, not now, not now i wanna keep reading"
    i really feel sorry for Phoenix :( i can understand how Alex is frustrated and everything, but he was such a dick :S Jack was so cute, trying to calm Envy:))))
    and last sentences were so dramatic, so so amazingly written. i loved the end of the chapter :) i mean i loved the whole chapter:D
    May 25th, 2011 at 06:09pm