Down Under - Comments

I love how you began it and that you didn't explain everything like what happened to her father and stuff 'cause it makes me want to keep reading it.

Anyway, really well written and I can't wait to see what happens to her in Australia.

Although rather short, I love the layout, and I think it is a great beginning! I'd love to see more. :]

The fact that you are writing about my home country makes me so happy and a number one reader for this story. Plus the fact that it was beautifully written and a readable layout (YAY!) makes me want to read it more. Can't wait for future updates :)