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  • Parfaitavectoi

    Parfaitavectoi (100)

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    I love how you began it and that you didn't explain everything like what happened to her father and stuff 'cause it makes me want to keep reading it.

    Anyway, really well written and I can't wait to see what happens to her in Australia.
    January 15th, 2011 at 04:34pm
  • miss.mia

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    Although rather short, I love the layout, and I think it is a great beginning! I'd love to see more. :]
    January 3rd, 2011 at 07:41am
  • swell

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    The fact that you are writing about my home country makes me so happy and a number one reader for this story. Plus the fact that it was beautifully written and a readable layout (YAY!) makes me want to read it more. Can't wait for future updates :)
    November 5th, 2010 at 04:17am
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