Art of Life - Comments

I don't have any problem with this. It's really nice to see that you've written your way of life and then put it up on Mibba, you're brave. And well, if they don't like the way you are, then screw them, you're amazing and unique. You have so many points for you with this, believe me. The only thing that didn't help it was the layout, well, the colors burned my eyes. Anyways, the colors' power was really meaningful. You made it great (:

Kudos to you for writing out your own life and conveying your emotions so well!

I would suggest spacing between every paragraph to make it a bit easier to read, and there was a spot where your coding was messed up.

Other than that, this was a really nice piece!

Whoa. The red is a little bright for my taste, but rather fitting.
D: This is so sad. Teasing stories always make me really sad. >.< Especially when the parents start to say things.
But this is amazing. *subs*

This was a really easy read (in a good way, of course.). I really enjoyed reading it, and your style is very enjoyable. Keep it up =D.

This is really good. A great read, and definitely not something I've read before. I can relate to it, too. I mean, I never really was a huge sports person, but I have sometimes kind of wished I was a guy. It just seems so easy, doesn't it? So much better. Seeing the way they interact with each other, it just seems better.
But yeah, this is really good, and I definitely liked it very much! :)

Of course, the emotion was great. I didn't like the beginning that much, but the ending was wonderful. I agree, the layout was a bit bare. The words you used were amazing. It was well written and I enjoyed it. :) Excellent job.

I agree with everyone above me. The emotion in this is fantastic. And even then it's all real which makes it that much better. The only thing I have to really critique you on is the formatting and the layout. Normally, layouts and formats like this don't really get many readers because no one takes it seriously, this is just something I've learned from experience...BUT very nicely done my dear. :)

Wow, I know how it feels. This piece right hear, it spoke to me in that funny way that written words do. I always knew that their were others like me out there, but it still shocks me. =/ But you are really brave in typing up your true feelings and a part of your past. Bravo for that.

Oh, and I really liked the layout. It's simple, but it fits the story very well. Keep writing! =)

Benjamin Barker took the words right out of my mouth, as always. However, I have to say that the layout sort of hurt my eyes; I sort of get the feeling, though, that you're trying to convey blood? Hmm. It's very unique (: Anyways, I can sort of relate to this. I'm a major girly-girl, but I used to play hardcore basketball and volleyball. My grandma always told me that I'd eventually swap dresses for basketball shorts x] That never happened, but eh. I dunno if that made sense, but I tried. Overall, I enjoyed reading this. It was strage, probably the strangest I've read, but it's very good (:
Lovely job! <3

Wow. Very emotional.
It is rare to find a pure of heart piece, and you really put your soul into this one.
It's a strange piece, I haven't seen one like this before, and the raw emotion is outstanding.
A lovely read. It really makes you think.

I think the layout looks a bit bare, perhaps a little more organisation there and it would look great :D
At times, I think you should hae used speech marks instead of italics, or as well as.

Again, lovely :D