Steel City Diamonds - Comments

any chance of an update soon? :)

love it

I'd loveeee for this to be updated :))))

oh.
my.
GOD.
THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING.

can't wait for the next update!
this is ... WOW.

i'm a bit in love with this story, the way you started off was amazing. update soon, 'cause i seriously can't wait(:

I adored this. I love how you describe everything. Her thoughts are practically mine. Didn't her mother ever teach her not to go off with strangers? Hahahaha. Update soon?

i love this so much. i honestly should've been going to bed like a half hour ago. but i couldn't hahaha<3333

Ah, I adore Matt. :D

Ah-mazing story so far!

Didn't her mother teach her not to go off with strangers? haha :P

I would give it Ten Stars TOO!
Holy crap I'd be like "Ehhh I don't know you." and still walked off
at least they remembered her more than she did
Poor riley :(
MORE SOON!?

love ittttt! you're such an amazing writer :D keep up the good work!

Looks interesting. You really know how to capture a reader's attention with your large vocabulary and your perspective of the world, which is one of the most popular debates alive. Please update soon. I'd like to see where this goes.

I'm excited for this. I can't wait for the next update!

more?

I just got this goofy grin on my face and shivers. So intense yet subtle. I'm in love :)

The prologue was... impacting. For a few seconds, my heart had clenched, my mind was hazy, my eyes burned, and I wasn't sure who I was. I loved every second. You have definitely improved. Those words... I'm impressed.

Excitement? Check. I want more, more, more. This made me greedy but patience isn't out of my reach just yet. More please and thank you. :)

ha for halloween I was a Dead rocker chick but becuase of my fish nets and boots I was a dead striper? LOL
Light brown is a good enough wonder woman I've done the throwing up on a stranger balcony before not really fun. I love how you bring out Oliver's smart ass personality.
I can't wait to read more!

Your Oli stories always keep me wanting more
so I want more!
amazing writer I have to say AMAZING!

This is reality. This is the truth. Most people turn their backs on the plastic-ness of our culture and our world. Unlike a lot of people you have a firm grasp on the truth and that people blame God for this but in reality its our fault for making our world the way it is. People make their own choices and I can see that you're going to point that out in this story.

I really like Naked, but this seems like it's going to be more real and I'm a fan of reality. Though I think what really makes this is the fact that you probably wrote this and rewrote this a billion times because you didn't like the way it sounded. I like the way you use grammar and punctuation and words correctly. You don't try to make it confusing but you have to read between the lines. It's blunt but subtle.

I'm very excited to read what this has in store for us.

-claps excitedly-
So powerful and interesting. I also have no clue what's going to happen next and I'm quite excited ;D