i dont know about the other readers but from where i stand (sit at the moment) if you make brian cheat on janey or even make michelle kiss him against his will, i'll probably stop reading. i know that it may sound selfish but i dont think the story can handle that drama right now nor at anytime in the story (again) i love happy endings so if that happens ill probably blow a cascet. sorry if this upsets you and/or makes you mad. i do not mean to offend you OR disrepect your writing abilities. but i do think that it would be cute if brian flew home for thanksgiving and suprised janey.
Michelle+Tour= Disaster! i so agree with Leana...you know I always loved her...to me she is the voice of reason and fun XD... but still that was kind of dumb for Val to do though her heart was in the right place....she still wasn't thinking passed that second..0.0
I wonder how Janey is going to handle the news. Probably will trust Brian but with Michelle you never know whats going to happen. She is like an unpredictable storm... you don't know when its going to hit and how hard its going to hit either.
Mmm girl I love your updates<3 Every single one makes me do a happy dance because I am that excited to read them (; Keep up the amazing work and I hope you are doing well! I can't wait for more!
Yay!! GREAT update ! Too bad Janey cant go to brian on thanksgiving. . . . VAL !! HOW COULD YOU INVITE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I SAY "HER" BECAUSE NO ONE CAN SPEAK OF HER NAME!!!! IT MIGHT BRING DEATH UPON US ALL!!! lol :D but again , fabulous update [;
OMFG how could that (just angry right now) invite that whore to go with them to see the guys when Janey is not going to be there????!!!!! Man Val did the most stupid thing there and who cares if her so called boyfriend broke up with her and she is lonely!!!! Leana was right, she should have just send that tramp to her parents because you know how Michelle is, she'll try to mess things up with Brian and Janey! GOD WHY IS VAL IS SO STUPID!!!!??? When Janey finds she going to hate Val even more and might not even talk to her at all after this. Man you really left us hanging there, I seriously can't wait for the next update and it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!! XD AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!!! XD
bitch. anyone with common sense would not let michelle go on that bus at thanksgiving. no wonder val is blonde lol. good on lacey for sticking up for janey, maybe she should tell bri that michelles going to be with them, and he could fly back to see janey
So Brian is worried that Janey will leave him? When Matt told Brian what the girls were saying to Janey, they immediately left the party. Those guys are going to get the cold shoulder by Brian and Janey that I know for sure. Not only did they make them fight but they also make Brian worry about Janey. I hope Matt, Johnny and Zacky get after their girlfriends for being so insensitive toward Brian and Janey's decision on how they want to have kids. I look forward to the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Mmm poor Brian... he should know he has nothing to fear about because Janey loves that fool and would never leave him. And though he might be stupid and a dumbass sometimes he is just to freaking cute to stay mad at or to be mad at in the first place (; Plus its was acutally kinda cute and a turn on to see Brian that concerned and getting all carried away with the situation XD
Mmm I love this story and i love your writing :) Great update<3 And I can't wait for more (:
Dude that was really mean of htem to just gang up on her. I mean how would they feel if they didn't have any eggs in them and they wanted children. I bet they would be wanting Janey's support then... Gah its like slaps each of them in the face.
I am so glad that Mikki, Leana and Matt are on her side though. Matt made me smile when he came in, he even ignored Val. :)
Nicely written update<3 I really enjoyed reading it and I cannot wait for more of thiis oh so addictive story that you have created ^___^