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Hi. This story is so good like sdjflksdj please update. I'm crossing my fingers that they become official on the next chapters :)

please I need more. the whole story is just so perfect! <33

oh my god this is the greatest thing ever i need more!!!

Chapter 10 is FLAWLESS! :D
Basically, this whole story is.
I wonder what's gonna happen next? Please update ASAP. :)

I thought you forgot about this story... but since there's a new chapter, it's clear that you didn't. :D
I loved the new chapter; so cute yet so heartbreaking. :(
Can't wait to see more!

hmmmm. brigette was FAKING

love it!! cant wait for more! cant wait until stephen finds out that they have had sex!!

YAY, I HELPED THE PLOT :D
But, oh my, still amazed me with your writing. This is seriously my favorite story, keep it up. I love it :)

Stephen is so stupid. He should have known he couldnt keep all that from her forever.

You've updated since I read this last! :D Yay!
Chapter 6: Ohhhhh, shit. The other woman called? Wow, real smooth, chicky - I mean, the other girl, not Laney. My heart broke at her reaction; poor baby :( Is it just me or Stephen have dementia or something? Maybe the drinking and stuff finally caught up with him. Anyways, I love the little reconciliation during the chapter - if you can call it that, but I really liked it c: This is too adorable!
Chapter 7: Lol @ her reaction to Caroline's "Stephen's party" announcement. And I hate Bridgette. I think I spelled her name wrong, but I'm too lazy to go back and make sure that I spelled it right. Honestly, her name doesn't need to be spelled right. She's a bitch. Bimbo needs to back the freak off D< AND OH NOZE. WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO THEM!?!?!?!?

Update. Please. Now?! :D

oh i haven't really commented this, but can i just say how much i love it? and how amazing this truly is. and the fact i got excited for an update and it's like 2 in the morning rn. so i mean, it must be truly great. but i think what would twist things up, if brigitte was actually nice to them all, and that just bothered the fuck out of stephen. and it created problems there. you get what i mean? :P but anyways. this is amazing.

This is awesome ! I like it very much. You know your characters very well, and have me in the palm of your hand with every word. The imagery is amazing !

Okay, so I honestly never read stories like this, but I'm so glad that I claimed this. Just judging from the layout and banner, I can tell that I'm going to love it (:
Chapter 1: I also have to agree with what colour me perfect said about Lanely; I really do love her. She's an interesting character and the way you describe everything is just perfect, despite the little sex scene we got there, haha! I rarely ever see stories like this, where best friends are confused about their friendships with each other and end up having sex. Great twist there, though! I have to admit that I do read those horrifically fake paperback romance novels, and while I expected the sex scene to be just like those, I'm grateful that it wasn't, haha! Great opening! <3
Chapter 2: I want to kiss Stephen, just sayin'! He has this adorable-ness that makes me die a bit inside. Sure, he's a drunk and horny fool, but hey, I'm a sucker for adorable guys. This chapter was adorable in general :3
Chapter 3: Oooh, what's up with him? Why doesn't he remember? Oh, yeah, he was as drunk as hell. I wonder, however, why Laney is denying that they did. It's sort of a scenario that I see alot of friends having - and I think that my friend and I are having as well, minus the sex, of course. And I really hope Stephen doesn't get drunk again too :(
Chapter 4: Wow, this chapter was really awesome. Sorry for the crappish comment on this one, but it's honestly all I can say right now...
Chapter 5: Okay, I'm hooked. Please update or I shall die.

Really, I'm hooked. I'm absolutely in love with Laney and Stephen; both are so amazing, despite the situation that they're in, but I still love them <3 I'm excited to see the next update and therefore, I am subbing. (: Lovely job! <3

No, dammit. I kept being pulled away from the computer but I wanted to read everything you posted. I did. I'm in love. I want more, yes.

Laney is an amazing character and I love the way she does things. I have to agree with colour me perfect on the amusing part, even though you probably didn't intend for it to be that way.
Your writing is fantastic and I love the way you describe things. Utterly amazing.

Update soon, yes? (:

More.

I find this story so amusing, even though you might not have intended that. Laney is just a wonderful main character, and her self-dialogue is so realistic and helps me relate to her a lot. Drunk Steven is gorgeous. 'Nuff said.

Your writing is very flawless, and I think that your strong point is your dialogue. It's always realistic and humorous, and it keeps your characters real and enjoyable to read about. I love the way she made him believe that they didn't have sex, and she still didn't get awkward about that. Honestly, I just think that she's an amazing character.

Great job!

i love it! update soon??

please update soon!! i love your story!

Chapter 3:
I watched Stephen devour
^ good vocab.(:

"So Stephen," I began. "What is this "some thing" you wanted to talk to me about?
^ a quote belongs there

she acted like she didn`t like him and if she acted like she did maybe they would of got somewhere like maybe if she didn`t act so freaked by the fact they had sex or that it is so unrealistic maybe they could be a couple bc he likes her I know it
she didn`t even have to say they did ha ha

(thank God for nametags),
^ I liked that little side note

Then, all of a sudden, I felt nervous, and my knees weakened. Why do I feel like tonight isn't going to be a good night, like there's something terrible that's going to happen?

Please don't get drunk tonight, Stephen.
^ ha ha foreshadowing again

it would kind of be awesome for him to pretend drunk and try to atempt to see what usally happens and like if she takes advantage of him

It's upsetting how I wrote the most btw :(

Second chapter:
I didn't got drunk last night,
^ I believe that is suppose to be get?

My eyelids were drooping from lack of sleep,
^ that is good imagery(: A lot better then just saying they were tired

wanted to just stand there at the cashier and watch him sip his coffee,
^ that`s cute and so welly shows her feelings for him(:

"I wanted to ask you out for lunch."
^ I believe there is like an extra space there

We rarely hang out nowadays, and I want talk to you about... some thing."
^ that`s like foreshadowing(: and I actually went aw when I read that lol

I could have melted in a puddle,
^ I love how u use such great figures of speech(:

e was now standing with his hands inside his pockets.
^ just like to note I love when guys have their hands in their pockets(: