September 8th, 2011 at 05:46pm
I'm gonna comment again, one because I've been wanting to read this forever.
Anyways, I like his mind's thoughts, it's almost as if it's a whole other person, which of course you were trying to do. It's absolutely a beautiful story even though it's only a few chapters long.
Keep on updating. (:
The layout was really nice and the summary confused me a little bit but I liked it anyways. Good job! (: