lady, you did damon perfectly. this is why we're writing roots and wings together because you are one of the only authors on here who can stay true to his character. he's a hard fellow to write and you honestly do him amazingly. :) i love this and i love that it wasn't a lovey-dovey one but one that would probably actually happen in the show. you're amazing my love.
Ah, I knew I read this one before. But since it was so amazing, I'm glad that I claimed it again (: Everything was so...pretty about this, even though they were arguing. I'm sorry if I sound like a total n00b about the series and start rambling on about things I don't know about, but I do know that Stefan dated Elena, then something happened and their not together anymore? Right? I could be wrong, I know it. Don't get me wrong; Stefan was a total cutie, but let's face it: DAMON IS ONE HOT TAMALE. But anyways, I keep trying to piece together everything that happened between Elena and Stefan, but nothing is coming up >.< Oy. That teaches me to read the books and watch the series xD Sorry for the rambling comment again, but please know that I absolutely love this (: <3
This is really, really good. Honestly the best Vampire Diaries fanfic that I've read yet. Congratulations on winning first place in the contest, your entry is outstanding.
I've never read a Vampire Diaries fanfic that's this amazing. Good Lord, girl, you have a major way with words and imagery! I think I saw only the pilot of the show, but never got time to watch the rest. If it's as good as this then...wow. Anyways, from what I know and read about Damon, he's a real charmer. And you've got his personality down pat. He's a a bit of a jerk, but I guess that's what draws everyone in to him, including Elena and all the VD fangirls xD If I remember correctly, Stefan and Damon aren't that close as brothers and that Elena mentioning his name could have pretty bad consequences with Damon? Okay, ignore me. I'm just rambling here x] But as far as I can tell, you're really amazing with keeping up with Damon's personality and character. I've rarely seen people do that and pull it off as lovely as you did (: Amazing job! <3