Of The Night - Comments

Aww man, whilst I love Phoenix and want her and him together, I kinda feel sorry for Daren
As she pretty much has just led him on and is now gonna expect him to just sit there whilst she wants his brother
Then again what's Phoenix gonna think?

:)
please type faster so your awesome ideas get in the story quicker.
i love this story so much i can't wait for the next chapter XDDD
i'm curious as to what'll happen next.

Man I just want her and Phoenix back together again

i adore this story; its well written and the idea i cant get enough of,
please just keep writing! :3 & i'll keep reading - well of course.. ;]

It hurt him physically to see her. His heart was panging in his chest and the bond was urging him to jump out of the car and go back to her. It was his emotions that urged the most, he wanted to scoop her up into his arms and hold her tightly against him. He wanted to feel that gaze on him, see that smile, hear that voice and feel that mouth on his.
^ AWWWH.
:3
your an amazing writer, please keep it up. :))

I agree. The last chapter was great the way u wrote it.
U did a good job with describing the way he was feeling when he smelled lilith and when he saw her.
Kudos!

Aww he definitely still loves her. I hate how sad he is over it, I want them together so bad!

liked the new update cant wait for the next one

Aww, Phoenix must still love her. I hope he does otherwise I can see her being very heartbroken over it
I hope he sees her and does something

What a great stopping point for that last chapter ... -_-

i loved your new update cant wait for the next one

Awwwwww.....poor her..!!!

Awesome. I really like this.
Keep writing, you're really good.

ohh i love the new update... i feel some drama coming on darn likes his brothers girl O_o Ohhh whats going to happen next???

hey i love this story i can wait for the next update

Update more soon please <33

I really like this story so far, and I must admit I do live it whenever I get an email telling me there's an update.
Can't wait for more!

Ohhhhhh....oh em gosh.....she got in the bed with him....grrrrrrrr.....bad lily...!!!

Awwwww. Dayum... Thats so cuuuuute! <3 I lurve Pheonix <33 I want one >=D lol Subscribed !i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!i!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story so far :)
I really hope you update it soon, and I'm definitely wanting some sexytime with Phoenix xD