Poor Rain being in love with someone who doesn't love him back (or so we are led to believe) D: But this was an awesome chapter! You're so imaginative my lovely twin! This story never ceases to be absolutely wonderful
I love the idea either way, so do whatever feels right to you. If you want to structure it more, go at it. If you want to keep going from here, go at it. Either way, I'll still read this with fanboy rabidity :D
Honestly, I think you should do what you feel is right. It is your story and if you don't like something you can change it. You need to be happy with it. There will always be ppl who will not like and love your story. :) Personally I love the idea of this story and how it plays out. :)
I love faeries. :D I love this idea. The chapters could be a little longer and you need to check your grammar as well. Other than that I do enjoy this story. c: