Don't Let This Carry on Too Long - Comments

awwww thank youuuuu.
I was gonna continue it on, but I thought it might be more effective if I finished it leaving room for people to imagine what happens next.
I'm starting another one in the next few days so take a read.
And thanks so much for reading and commenting. :)
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This is really good!
AH! Poor Ian!
Poor 'girl'!
Poor Sean when/if he finds out!
You have to carry this on, update please!