Everything Is So Wrong... - Comments

thanks so very much.

i like how you ended it. not too complicated, not too drawn out. you did a really good job with this one, congratulations!

yeah. Well you gotta give him credit. At least hes not depressed where he wants to kill himself. Hes not ready to move on and he made a promise... but soon Alice will contact him and say move on. We'll be together forever later.

Freaky. I wanna shoot that guy already more soon?

thanks.

this story is sad...
and really good ^_^
more soon?

thanks. I know. Its because the counselor said to be careful around him. And the teacher was shocked that he outbursted like that. He usually doesnt do that... but she didn't have enough time to respond to that for he was out the door before she could.

hmm. josh's reply was interesting. i don't know if he'd get away with that in school, but it's always fun to dream, isn't it? otherwise, very good.

ugh. I hate doing that but for the sake of the story I guess I could live through it...

the first chapter is great, very well written. i can see your inspiration : )
my only criticism is to just go back to check for errors in spelling and punctuation. otherwise, you're fine!!!