Hehehe so I'm finally catching up on your stories and aigueh awwwww Tay and Jack are too god damn cute!!! I'm literally puking from the cute this isn't okay!!
I'm sorry I just didn't get into this story. I think that you should keep it going though. Don't let me get you down. This just isn't something I get into. Keep it going though, you are a very good writer. Your story is just not something that I get into. Keep it going though!!