Surprisingly Unexpected - Comments

Sorry I haven't read this in a while:(... Josh is an ass! Can't wait to read more!!!!! Btw: I can most relate to Ashley. And for all the worst reasons... Love the story :)

I don't like Josh. In fact, I'm pretty sure I hate him!
And ooh! I love Lie To Me! Cal's the best! Heh. :)
And Derek is getting sexier and sexier.
Update soon, please!

I've just updated with two chapters. Hopefully, I can update with three more chapters before the year ends!

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Thanks for the love.. ♥

*sighs dreamily*
Derek = <3
And Ooh! What's he going to say to Ash?!
Update soon! Please? (:

FOOD fight is the BEST way to EXERCISE right after you wake up with a HANGOVER. ;))

LOVE it! can't wait for more. ;)

I really like ur story. Cant wait 2 read more! :)

It's official. You have drawn me in and I can't get enough! :)
Oh - and Derek is sexy. Just thought I'd tell you that. Hehe.
And congrats! You've found the flow! Well, in my opinion, anyway.
Update soon!

Thanks so much you guys!

This is my very first attempt and you're right, Beezers, I did have a bit of a hesitation. I can't believe someone (well, two) liked my story. It makes my heart melt.

Yes, I will be updating soon and thank you for reading! :D

I like this so far! and I agree with the previous comment ;) update soon xoxo

First comment! Haha, go me!
Loving the first chapter, already! Can't wait for the next one!
Oh, and a little of criticism - all good, I promise! - Find your story's flow and go with it. Halfway through the chapter there's a bit of hesitation, but besides that, I'm loving the story!
I hope Josh isn't being bad. :S
Udate soon!