City Sinners - Comments

i love it :)
i'm curious...what do crystal and tyra look like?

Oh Shit
What's in a bucket, what's in a bucket but a bucket of shit but a bucket of grapes and grapes in your mouth, grapes in your mouth make ya happy down south. Make ya get a big boner, whatcha gonna do?

And now that I've done that...
I loved this upa-date! I got sooooo annoyed at the 'grand-mama' for not remembering the peanut allergy! How could you forget that? She could've killed him! ARGH! And then of course I laughed my ass off when they reappeared...I wonder if they'll realize it's her or what....and Unholy Confessions isn't a bad song, but my own favorite has got to be Girl I Know...yup yup. Hhaha...dancing for Avenged...that'd be fan-freaking-tastic! I'd love it <3. And waaay off the subject...I went and saw Burlesque the other day with one of my friends and it totally made me think of this story...with the dancing and what-not only I don't think they ever showed anything...or did private shows...I like your club better *nods* and now I end this long-ass comment with bunches of randomness....my final say? Upa-date soons! Do it.

Oh shit she dance for avenged sevenfold and now she doesnt know what to do ha ha.Good update please keep it up

yeah...you had me drooling again. Damn your sexy chapters making me all not as straight acting as i am! Lol. But moving on...epic chapter! Her side really came out. And poor jimmy...i couldnt stop giggling over his blushyness. Too cute! More soon! Crystal? Hop to it! Do it.

This is hella smexy!
You had me wayyyyy curious when I saw the masquerade masks, those were pure and sheer GENIUS!! xDDD
I have also noticed that you guys do alot of stories together, do you know each other in real life?

yaaay johnny got some!! man i would so be undressing matt with my eyes

I almost feel bad for saying this but not really...but that was hot! Haha Johnny and Jimmy, poor Brian, Matt and Zacky just having to watch...for now...I'd entertain Brian! Just saying...but I loved the upa-date and can't wait for mores! Soon? Do it.

Ooh...I loved it. She hates her job and I suppose I can see why. No one loves guys staring at them and gawking and all other things. But she is doing it for a good reason. Can't wait for the next upa-date! Tis...Crystal next? Do it.

this seems really interesting from the first two chapters. i think its tyra who is supposed to update? well, she should get writing.

AWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! Skylar is sooooo cute! Hahaha! I love the club's name! So fitting! Can't wait for the next upa-date so...ummm...tyra? Do it.

you got me already! please update!

*pokes you over and over again*
MORE MORE MORE!

CANT WAIT TO READ MORE UPDATE SOON

very interesting.
subscribed!

not a bad start...im definitely curious to see where it all goes...you had my attention at strippers by nite...so i subscribed. More soon? Btw:first commenter! Woot! And i think its 'bare'