My Best Friend Is Arranged to Marry My Boyfriend and I Love Him - Comments

I actually plan on updating tonight(:

You write it fairly well, but you perhaps need to build up the characters and plot a little more.

Also, I realise you're probably not going to continue this story, seeing as the last time you updated was 8 months ago, but I thought I'd comment anyway :XD

I like it. The idea's pretty good. But try to make it longer.