I'm not one to particularly like stories that have "time beginnings" like an astericked "Future" or "Past" before the chapter content but this seems to go fine. It's great for the story line that Alina has a dream. Many fan fictions don't include main characters who have little to no aspirations. This is definitely an exception. The layout is working fine and you have a good story on your hands. Good luck.
June 8th, 2012 at 06:51am