I've just begun this silken yarn of yours, and have found a tale most intriguing... beautiful imagery. I like being in your head... it's fun in here. Lol
I believe "friendly warnings" are even more scary... therefore here I am with a comment for you to continue ;D Can't wait for the meeting with the Beast O.o!
I can tell a good story when I read one, and this has the makings for a pretty awesome story. I like Xavier's character. He seems really care free when he is exspected to be more of a responsible person. I like this so far, take your time writing thought because if you force it, it won't come out as great. One subscription from me!