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  • Its_RobynXo

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    I love the interaction between the two of them! <3
    November 21st, 2010 at 06:45pm
  • pitts87pens

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    Great update..i really love them together they are so cute and charming...can't wait for more hun!
    November 21st, 2010 at 06:38pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    loved it
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    November 21st, 2010 at 05:04pm
  • Lady Looch

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    If he hadn’t been raised to know better than to take advantage of a drunk girl, he wouldn’t be having this problem.
    hahaha so rational.. blame it on the parents that taught you better :p

    “Sup Sega?”
    segaaaa hahahahhaha :D

    “Come on, you’re all quiet, and you played like shit last night, even for a rookie. Aren’t we paying a shit-ton of money for you? I want a refund!”
    HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA THAT IS HILARIOUS! >.< <-- that is my laughing face btw. sometimes it is my angry face. but today it is my laughing face

    “Trouble with women? You’re asking the expert.” Milan boasted, puffing out his chest, causing Patrice to chuckle and shake his head.
    Shakes head* milan milan milan.. you've got a lot of woman to handle

    “Sega… did you bump uglies with that little biddie?” Milan all but shouted. Okay, so not entirely grown men. “Well, with her I guess it wouldn’t be bumping uglies.” He mused to himself.
    MILAN! SHHHHH! YOU ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO BE THINKING ABOUT THAT SHIT.

    “Sex and drinking?! It’s like I don’t even know you!” Milan howled
    HAHAHAHAHAHA! i can NOT get enough of how entertaining Milan is today :D love that big buff buffoon :D :D :D

    “Give me the phone.” Milan insisted.
    “Yeah right.”

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! good job ty, that would be a bad idea :p

    “Maybe she’s trying to build your energy before taking you back to her place and slapping skins?” Milan suggested, making Tyler’s cheeks flush red again.
    HAHAHAHAHA! milan.. stop talking about tyler and anna bumping uglies and come do that with your girl here :D

    The very last place Anna needed to be was surrounded by more guys his age. No one was taking his Anna from him.
    RAWR! protective tyler :D

    But Tyler didn’t want to forget, he wanted more.
    amen! we all want more

    The truth was, he’d go over this whole yard with a fork if she asked him to.
    hahahaha that is love man. i don't even do that for my mother

    He found himself counting the hours to when he would get to hear her voice again.
    that would be creepy if i didnt find it so adorable and endearing

    “They’re big guys.” Tyler nodded, “and please, don’t take anything Milan says seriously.” He added. “He just likes to talk to hear his own voice.”
    hahahahahahaha or he's trying to impress his main tug

    “Went out with his main tug.” Looch rolled his eyes. “And speaking of tugs, you know Brianna, right?” He introduced the familiar brunette to the left of him.
    AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MILAN'S LIFE JUST GOT A HELL OF A LOT BETTER!!!! YUM! tug me around the bedroom ;d

    “Anna, this is my teammate Milan and his friend Brianna, and this is my other teammate, Patrice.” Tyler introduced.
    friend.. whaaaa.. ty.. why you gotta be like that.

    “Ty, babe, show them around.” She placed a hand on his stomach for a short moment before disappearing into the kitchen.
    AHHH!!!! CUUUTEEE!!!! SHE CALLED HIM BABE!!! AND TOUCHED HIM!!!! <3 <3 <3 it is starting :D she likes him :D

    He was tired of being cute, he just wanted to be hers.
    ohh bubba <3 its okay, soon. good things come to those who wait

    “Rough.” Milan shook his head. “Want me to talk to her? Move it along a bit?”
    “Please no.” Tyler shook his head right away. “That would be counter-productive.” He insisted.

    hahahahaha ohh god i love their relationship :D they are so funny together

    “We shower together, I can lie and tell her you’re hung like a moose.” Milan shrugged casually, making Tyler’s cheeks burn a bright red.
    *DIES* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA

    “How about no one says anything? I can handle this myself.” Tyler rubbed his hands over his face.
    hahahahaha i don't think ty wants patrice to say anything.. not with his smooth talking and french speaking :p a little intimidating :p

    With a limited amount of space, Milan and Brianna took up the couch
    yumyumyumyum

    “No, no, no, I got this one.” Milan insisted
    okay.. im kinda with tyler on the.. milan maybe you shouldn't talk thing right now.. hahaha im nervous for this story..

    “I took it upon myself to hop behind the bar and whip her up a screaming orgasm myself.” He winked. “You know, the few I gave her before we left the bar.”
    OHMYGOD! OH.MY.GOD. HO HO HO, THE BIG BIG OOO!!!!! *DIES* HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i love my life.... <3

    He waved his hand, not that either of them understood that he was calling them a good-looking couple.
    i agree. they are cute together <3 they need to hook up

    He needed to work harder.
    ohh ty <3 you need to figure something out! we need to go on some double dates!

    this was by far my favorite chapter, and not even because I'm in it, because it was SOOOOO FUNNY! everyone was hilarious and I love tyler and milan's relationship. I love it when teammates give each other shit like that.. hilarious.
    sigh.
    i want them to be together!
    i don't care if this is 4 chapters in, i just want to know what happens and i want them together.. and i want poor tyler to have to stop taking cold showers!
    get on that karabear..
    love love love love love loved this.
    favy favy favy chapter for sure!
    more soon! now! asap! need it!
    November 21st, 2010 at 04:38pm
  • Jon Toews

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    Ohmygosh. This was hilarious! I love how the guys tease him!
    Anna needs to get herself together and realize she wants to have Tylers babies, cause I mean who doesn't? Haha<3
    November 21st, 2010 at 02:46pm
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    The end cracked me up. Loved it:)
    Can't wait for the next update:)
    November 21st, 2010 at 02:30pm
  • mully17

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    Awww how adorable! Tyler needs to get her
    November 21st, 2010 at 11:14am
  • ThingCalledLove

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    I'm not a fan of the bruins (which I'm sure you can tell why, based on my sig) but I kind of love this. I really really do. You are such a fantastic writer and I just adore this story. I love how you can make this really sexy without making it raunchy, not that I'm against some raunchiness. *winkwink*. :)
    November 18th, 2010 at 04:00am
  • Jessica;

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    Noooooo Tyler, there's no need to be a good boy.
    Really, GET IT!
    Yeah, obsessed with this.
    More soon. <3
    November 17th, 2010 at 07:34pm
  • Lady Looch

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    “You look so cute sipping that.” She teased. “You’re going to get carded until you hit forty-five.” She insisted.
    hahahha so true.. tyler is such a baby face.. but it works for him.. just like it works for osh.

    Sweet baby Jesus, Mary, and Joseph. He folded his lips over his teeth before swiping the treat off of her finger, worried that if he actually allowed his tongue to touch a part of her body, he’d pop a boner in half an instant.
    HAHAHAHAHHA can't handle it!

    “You had to call in back up? I didn’t know I was that hopeless.” He tried to tease but worried when her eyebrows knit together.
    hahahahah slightly pathetic. but cute :)

    “I can see how people would get Indie from Anna.” He grinned, following her into the kitchen as she slid on two oven-mitts.
    I was thinking the same thing.. hahahahahaha

    “My last name is Jones.” She rolled her eyes, not wanting to see his face lest he burst into laughter.
    I AM DYING! ROFL! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i mean.. cute... :D

    “No, no, no, I mean… I hate cats because they freak me out. I’m scared of cats.” He pressed, waiting for her reaction.
    NO WAY! that is weird.. but cute..! hahahah

    “Your feet are like… huge.” She giggled, “literally, it looks like you have flippers on under your socks.” She giggled even harder.
    big feet means a big...

    “I lied.”
    GET IT TY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Unfortunately, there was a growing problem between Tyler’s leg’s that he knew would not be addressed that night.
    well shit!

    “No, no, a little more.” She wrapped her arms around his neck, bringing his lips back down onto hers for another wine-induced kiss.
    OH SNAP! OH SNAP! TY! YES!!!!!! *HIGH FIVE* GET IT BOIII!

    Why did he have to be the good guy?
    hahah seriously.. the good guy always loses :p

    this was hilarious and adorable.. and i loved it
    i totally have to leave but i really wanted to read this!
    but really! loved! a loT keep writing! because I love! <3
    more soon!!!!!!!!!
    *COUGH* LUCIC *COUGH*
    November 17th, 2010 at 12:09am
  • Aliannah_Rocks

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    Bahahha I freaking love it!
    It's totally how I imagine Tylers thought process to be!
    Its light and funny but yet at the same time I get the sinking feeling shes bad news bears and has this crazy ex with drama drama drama!
    Can not wait to see what happens after the kiss! Love that he can't control him self and had to run off I was laughing for a good few min. Can't wait for more!
    November 16th, 2010 at 02:48am
  • Jon Toews

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    Hahah <3 I loved this chapter so freaking muchhhh! I'm in live with Tyler in this, he's so presh!
    November 16th, 2010 at 02:30am
  • laurenj23

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    I don't know why but I have this feeling that she is hiding a lot... hmmm
    November 15th, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    Don't worry Tyler, you'll have her soon
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    November 15th, 2010 at 09:29pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Yay, I'm glad they kissed!
    This is amazing, I love it! <3
    November 15th, 2010 at 07:29pm
  • jerseyloveee

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    Indianna Jones. bahahah.
    Love this!
    November 15th, 2010 at 05:57pm
  • mully17

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    Awwww little tyler grew up! :)! I loved that! I hope they kiss more they are cute together
    November 15th, 2010 at 05:43pm
  • Rylie_

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    They kissed...yay! About time!
    Who is this Henry dude?
    Ty is afraid of cats...awww how cute.
    Can't wait for more.
    November 15th, 2010 at 05:00pm
  • pitts87pens

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    love this story...all of you stories are so great but this one is by far my favorite..i think they guy that showed up at her door was prolly her ex boyfriend ...can't wait to see what happens with these two..update again soon!
    November 15th, 2010 at 04:42pm
  • Ally4647

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    Love the story so far :)
    November 15th, 2010 at 01:28pm