Where You Belong - Comments

Hm. I kind of agree with Tyler. But she demands a time table for when he'll be home that night, but she can just up and leave for some unknown amount of time? Pretty hypocritical...

I just started reading this last night and let me say, theres no way your 13! this stuff is better than girls that are 19, 20, 21 yrs old! Its not cheesy, some parts are, but the majority is very real! Ive read a lot of Fan Fic, and hockey romance (not just on mibba, blogger, etc. but published novels) more than any hockey fan should, and your stuff is some of the best Ive seen. Id rate your story in my top ten stories, Ive read (And Ive easily read over a 100 stories) Its also amazing how you can write in third person so well for being so young. I know published authors who cant write third person. Keep the writing up, it might turn into a very profitable career.

“We both know he looks just like his Daddy. Brown hair like Daddy, dark eyes like Daddy, and big ears, like Daddy.” He insisted
lololol that's why he's so cute :D

“Yeah, baby, we’re going to have to pin back your ears when you get older, huh? Can’t have those dumbo flaps like Papa.” She teased, making Tyler shake his head as he took Aidan from his mother’s arms. “But, he snagged me, so maybe the ears will work in your favor.” She giggled.
hahahahahahahahahah! flop flop!

She would be staying at home, watching after Aidan, cleaning Tyler’s new home and doing exactly what she said she’d never do – taking care of a man instead of pursuing her own career.
blahhhh. that would be hard. especially for anna because she had finally gotten the job of her dreams :/ damn babies! … but he's so presh!

Mommy rocked him than when Daddy did.
awwww!!! he just loves his papa so much! <3

“Who knew you were such a botanist?” She laughed. “But I need something real to eat, babe, I need a steak or some chops or something, but these muffins are just not cuttin’ it for me.” She placed a hand on her stomach.
a-fucking-men. none of this dainty shit. give me a steak!

“You still should be eating right and exercising every day.” She laughed, “I’ll work out with you, I need to work off my baby pounds. My mom said she was still working off her baby weight when I turned eighteen and I do not want to wind up like that.” She finished.
she was not doing something right then…. bahahahaha

“I’m kind of digging the post-pregnancy body.”
as you fucking should since she gave birth to your huge baby!

“I’m two seconds away from slapping you upside your head.” She gave him a pointed look.
do it. he doesn't understand :p

He awkwardly rubbed his free hand against his denim-clad thigh, feeling the lump in his pocket, he felt that now was as good a time as any.
OHHHH!!!!! get it TY!!!!!!

“Tyler… that is a beautiful ring.” She insisted, “and… and I know how hard this must have been, but… I can’t marry you.”
ouchhhh. shut down…. :/

“Sucker was still in the dryer.” She laughed. Tyler nodded wordlessly and took Aidan from the changing table.
oh my god. i'm like dying at the awkwardness of that moment… :/ ekkkk!

She gathered him in her arms, resting in the rocking chair, she wanted to cry.
i feel bad for her :( all she wants is to just live her life and give aidan a nice life.. but it's so hard to do that when tyler won't let it go.. but then again it's hard for him because loves her so much :( what a shitty situation..

“Exactly how long are you staying for?” He asked, sitting up and resting against the headboard, one foot planting itself on the ground.
all of a sudden he's not feeling so calm anymore…

“And whose fault is that?” He hissed, frowning as a deep scowl overtook his features.
uh oh. he shouldn't have said that

“Well maybe I wanted to be kissing my fiancé.” He shrugged, still hurting in his chest when he thought about the day she rejected his proposal.
oh ty… that makes me sad for him :( i know you're hurting but you can't make her suffer for trying to do what's best for everyone.

“Yeah, well you had no problem sleeping with me when I wasn’t.”
holyyyyyyy shit. BURN.

“I can’t stay here and be this housewife you need me to be. I have plans and goals and dreams and I can’t do that if all I’m doing is staying home to cook and clean and take care of you and Aidan. I love him more than anything else in this world, but this isn’t the life I asked for.”
that is horrible :( and to be honest she shouldn't have to be.. but with tyler's job.. where does that leave her?? :(

soooo i totally agree with her on this, but a part of me still really hurts for tyler. i mean he loves her and he wants to marry her, but i think part of anna said no because she feels like it's only for aidan. Idk i just feel like she should have like taken it and been like.. we're engaged to be engaged or have a long engagement because she does love him :(
idk, it's hard because i understand both parties.
I really hope they can work their shit out and not just turn into those people who are just parents but can't work it out between them to be a couple :(
BUT! i absolutely love love loved this!
definitely one of my favorite chapters so far
I can't wait to see what happens next!
update super super fast!

What the heck!?!?! So she's just gonna leave...just like that? Awe poor Tyler, update again soon please, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh, poor Tyler! And then, poor Anna! I hope it gets happier soon, for the baby's sake! Great chapter (even if it was sad) and I can't wait for the next one!

i was definitely not expecting that! honestly, i agree with tyler. if she feels like such a housewife she needs to at least mention it to him rather than let her feelings build up until she decides she needs to take aidan on an extended vacation with her.

AHHHH!!!!! AN UPDATE!! hehe loved it! please do another soon :)

Ahhh, Tyler is my boo but Anna is right here.
He just expects things out of her instead of asking her what she wants.
However, she needs to work it out with him & not just run away.
Cause only a crazy ass bitch runs away from Tyler Seguin.
More more more!
<3

I feel bad for Tyler! That chapter made me realllllly dislike Anna now!
And now she's running away with Aidan!
Curious to see what's gonna happen next! <3

This was def my favorite chapter..so good, i feel bad for both of them for not getting what they want...can't wait for more..

ahhhh mann i really thought she would say yes! Poor Ty:(
I hope they work it out, but Anna's right they are a little young to get married. Maybe a long engagement?

On a sidenote i never really noticed Tyler's ears hahah

Aww I really want these two to work it out!!

I'm kind of caught in the middle. I'm mostly on Anna's side though. Tyler shouldn't be treating her like crap just because she said no. I feel bad for Tyler that she shot him down but maybe shes right when she said he was too young. I mean look at the way he handled to rejection. he's acting like an immature little kid..... update again soon!! lol

sounds like she didn't really explain why she said no.
and although I understand why Tyler did that, his reaction shows that he is in fact not ready, because he's being kind of childish about it, if you ask me. Of course that's a big thing to ask and I understand he's upset she said no, but he should be a little more understanding as to why she said no. It's not like she said no to being to him, she only said no to marrying him (right now). For Tyler that's the same thing though, I guess.

Ohmygod. I can't even believe she said no to marrying him. Definitely didn't see that coming. Great chapter. Can't wait for more:) <3

No! She can't leave. They need to be together and whether or not they are too young, she should have said yes!

I feel bad for Tyler :(

BB Sega!
Looooved this!

I loved the Tammy mention! I just really love the whole Horton family...probably because Tammy was so obviously excited at the Bruins Rolling Rally.

such a cute chapter!