Where You Belong - Comments

  • Tyler was tiptoeing around her, unsure of their status seeing as the last time they saw each other, she was crawling out of his bed.
    LOLOLOLOLOL! bang bang, bang bang

    She giggled; reminding him of all the time she spent around more young, athletic guys that he was sure had more than a great time being around her.
    oh ty ty is just so jeal of those college boys :p just remember baby that you're making the millions

    he snuck his hand into hers over the console, proud of his accomplishment.
    LOLOLOL! i love how he is so proud of that

    “Anna’s supposed to be here.” He frowned, straining his eyes under his visor. Those were where her seats would be, right? “I can usually see her once or twice but I don’t think she’s here.” He added.
    super sega is protective sega

    “What about Anna?” Patrice asked, ears perking up at the mention of Tyler’s blonde not-girlfriend that he was just the tiniest bit fond of.
    LOLOLOLOL. Patrice is just trolling :p

    “If anyone forgot, we’re losing a game!” Milan cut in, effectively ending the conversation, but that didn’t keep Tyler from worrying.
    Thanks Milan :) I love that rough side of him. RAWR.

    “What – what, why? Why are you going? What about… what about your job? Your house? What about me?” [/i[
    poor baby :(

    “But what? What is it? Did I do something? I can fix it, Anna. I know I haven’t been around much lately, but I can make more time.” He fought for words
    oh my god <3 he is doing everything he can to make her stay. he loves her so much :( heartbreak city right here

    “I – I can get you a job, I swear I can. You can’t leave, Anna.” He finished, turning her back to face him finally to see how rattled she was. “What can I do, Anna? I thought everything was fine! I thought things were good, we were hanging out and you love your job and…” He shook his head, finally feeling the effects of being blindsided by the person he cared for most – loved even. “I love you, Anna. You can’t just go.”
    MY HEART IS BREAKING! THIS IS SO SAD!!! :( :( :( POOR BABY! STAY ANNA! JUST STAAAAAY!!!!

    “Preg-pregnant?” He asked, feeling his throat go dry and pupils dilate. “Like pregnant, pregnant?”
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! like PREGNANT PREGNANT! Tyler, i'm curios as to what other type of pregnant their is...

    “I can’t be a pregnant conditioning coach. I can’t ruin your career with a baby – and I surely can’t ruin your reputation. You’re nineteen, Tyler. You… we can’t do this.” She shook her head.
    NO! YOU CAN DO IT! YOU CAN DO ANYTHING IF YOU JUST STAY IN BOSTON WITH HIM!

    “That’s… that’s my baby. I know it is and you can’t just take it away from me.” He was angry with her. She couldn’t leave him; she couldn’t take his baby away from him. “You can’t leave me.”
    you go ty! you go! you tell her she has to stay because that is your baby!

    . “You can’t leave without giving me a chance.” He finished, dropping to his knees. His head was swimming and he didn’t know what to do, but he knew he couldn’t let her leave.

    “Tyler, don’t be ridiculous.” She blushed as he wrapped his arms around her waist and pressed his face into her tummy.

    oh my god.. i could just melt with that! <3 SO PRESH! fall to your knees and snug with the baby :D i'm a sucker for that shit

    “You have to.” He repeated, now crying as well, “you have to let me try.”
    oh my god <3 <3 <3 <3

    OKAY! HANDS DOWN! BEST FINDING OUT YOUR HAVING A BABY SCENE EVER! (well, since mine and tony's presh moment :p)
    love love love love loved it!
    and im so glad i got another update to read :D
    they're going to make it <3
    they're going to have the baby and everything will be just fine <3
    promise!
    FIJAHFIAOJ!
    i'm so cited! I love babies and i think tyler would be a surprisingly good dad.
    he's young but he deserves a chance
    and he's going to do everything he can to make things alright <3
    IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
    MORESOOOOOON!!!
    April 18th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • Love the update. I cant believe that she is pregnant. Cant wait for more
    April 18th, 2011 at 12:00am
  • Holy ajhgksjdgkksfgksfdgk.
    AHHHH!
    Kara, I so did not see that coming.
    I hope she stays though.
    They could be the perfect little family & that will be one damn good looking baby.
    More soon?
    <333
    April 17th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • HOLY freaking COW! that just came out of nowhere didnt it? hahaha wowwwww speechlesss.
    i cant wait to see where this goes!<3
    April 17th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • that chapter totaly made up for the lack of updates. oh my goodness. i didnt see that coming until like half way through the chapter, and wow. all that i ask is that you update this soon or i may just die
    April 17th, 2011 at 07:47pm
  • omg i so knew she was gonna get knocked up lol but please keep updating i love your story
    April 17th, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • Holy crap batman! Pregnant! I did not see that coming!

    Segs as a daddy...hehe. Can't wait to see this play out.
    April 17th, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • I did not see that coming at all! Update soon!
    April 17th, 2011 at 05:28pm
  • Love it! Has a great plot with interesting original charcters! Can't wait until the next update!
    April 17th, 2011 at 04:35pm
  • As soon as he picked her up for breakfast and she said she was eating like crazy, I knew it! lol
    Thank goodness he was able to convince her to stay and give it a try!
    I loved it and I'm looking forward to more! <3
    April 17th, 2011 at 03:42pm
  • I really really love this!

    but I'm also laughing because this scenario is the same one I have in the Ty story I'm writing myself lol it's a much different set up, but the incident is the same *chuckle* great minds think alike? :)
    April 17th, 2011 at 11:20am
  • Totally didn't see that coming!
    Awesome story !
    April 17th, 2011 at 10:03am
  • woah! that was some big news there...hopefully they'll work everything out!!
    April 17th, 2011 at 09:57am
  • Aww tyler as a dad will be truly amazing I think and she better stay
    April 17th, 2011 at 09:53am
  • OMG! I cannot believe.
    I hope you update soon becaause this is one of my favorite stories.
    April 17th, 2011 at 09:50am
  • WHAT JUST HAPPENED :o
    haha, I did not expect that at all!
    April 17th, 2011 at 08:01am
  • Awww, he doesn't want her to leave. I think him making her stay was a very grown up thing for him to do. They won't have to try, it'll work out.

    Keep up the awesome work.
    April 17th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • I absolutely love this story and I really hope you continue it!
    March 27th, 2011 at 07:33am
  • Ahh just read this story so far...it's soo cute!! Tyler is adorable and Anna is being dumb...can't wait for more, I love it so far! Update soon please :)
    February 17th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • screw age!!!!!!!!!!!! just put the two of them together!!!
    hahahah brilliant update as always!!!!!
    loooking forward to the next one! and hopefully soon!
    February 2nd, 2011 at 04:18am