Where You Belong - Comments

  • I kid you not, I totally fist pumped when I saw that you updated this.
    I loved this chapter! There were so many times where I couldn't help
    but to just burst into giggles, because I think we're all just 13 year old
    girls on the inside :P It was ridiculously sexy, but it was tastefully done!
    I'm so glad the two of them hooked up, I just hope it doesn't change anything
    when the lights come back on. They need to be together now.
    Can I also just say that I loved the fact that Tyler was so inexperienced?
    It was wonderful, and I love him, and I love her, and they just need to
    love one another. I was also wondering if the "telemarketer" was going to
    make another appearance in the future? It didn't seem like his stuff with Anna was done,
    but he hasn't really cropped up since. Oh well! I love this, and I hope you update soon! <3
    January 6th, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • For being 13, you're a really good writer! <3
    Keep it up!!
    I'm addicted<3
    January 6th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • LOVE LOVE LOVE
    I don't think there's really anything more I can say!
    Amazing chapter, looking forward to how things go between them now! <3
    January 6th, 2011 at 05:14pm
  • Awesome chapter..i can not wait to see what happens with these two now..are they gonna start dating or not? lol update again soon!
    January 6th, 2011 at 04:52pm
  • “Oh, take it off Mr. Reynolds.” Anna sat, wide-eyed in her family room as she watched The Proposal for what seemed like the fiftieth time.
    oh praise jesus.. however, tyler.. is MUCH MORE attractive with his shirt off.

    It had been months since she had gotten laid last and she was well overdue for some attention.
    girl, you could totally get laid if you just threw yourself at ty ty

    “Please don’t tell me this was your weapon.” He grabbed the glass bottle from her with a smirk.
    hahahahahahahha :D love ty

    “Jesus!” He shouted as she shoved her bare toes under his thighs to warm up
    see, this is why i would hate to be a guy. Because us girls do this all the time, and I know personally that i hate cold toes. worse than cold fingers.

    It was now or never, this was his shot. “Anna?”
    OHHH! YOU GO TY TY! YOU GO! GET IT ALL!

    “I’ve never been so sure,” He insisted
    christ, ain't that the truth! (thank god this is finally happening)

    “Once or twice.” He muttered, not really wanting his rather short track record to ruin the mood.
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAA! I'M SORRY, I JUST COULD NOT HELP BUT LAUGH! HAHAHAHAHAHA!

    *gasp* kara! the c word!for shame!

    T-Y-L-E-R. He spelled out with the tip of his tongue, loving the way she twisted and whimpered beneath him.
    LOL! he would

    “What??” “Just kidding.”
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LAUGHED SO HARD!

    FINALLY! PRAISE JESUS! THEY FINALLY BANGED!!!!!!
    YES!!!!!!!!!
    i was so excited when i saw this update because I knew what it meant! :D
    thank god the power went out :D
    now that they've done the nasty, there is no reason they can't get together :D
    boom! dating, marriage, babies.
    anna gets the SECOND hottest bruin ;)
    this was FABULOUS
    don't know why you were worried at all :p
    more soon please???
    this story deserves much more love!
    January 6th, 2011 at 04:40pm
  • Tyler seguin sex= ohmygod(:
    January 6th, 2011 at 01:22pm
  • GAH,FINALLY !
    : D
    January 6th, 2011 at 01:09pm
  • I think we should all get an update because it's my birthday :)
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:00pm
  • Oops, got so excited forgot to finish that thought....
    Can't wait to see what happens between Segs and Jones!
    December 21st, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • I am so glad you have this going!! Ty is so fricken hot! I can't wait for more of this, and what is going to happen between Indianna Jones!!! (Love the name for Anna btw, so freaking awesome and cute!)
    December 21st, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • Well hot damn, I wouldn't mind hearing that XD
    December 14th, 2010 at 01:50am
  • i missed this story so much, they are really cute, they def. need to hook up or at least kiss sometime soon..def great update! Can't wait for more!
    December 13th, 2010 at 03:34am
  • Hook up time in 4, 3, 2, 1! They need to hook up already. There is so much sexual tension between them that it's not even funny. When they do hook up though, sparks are gonna fly.

    Can't wait for more.
    December 13th, 2010 at 01:16am
  • Idk how I missed a chapter of this...
    But OMG AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.
    Btw, they better hook up.
    I will be so mad, Kara.
    SO MAD.
    But seriously, let the boy hit it.
    <333
    December 13th, 2010 at 12:25am
  • Oh my. Poor Tyler.
    I loved this chapter. The end was hilarious but damn that is awkward.
    I do hope the two of them hook-up soon.
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:43pm
  • Yikes!! They need to hook up. For real!
    December 12th, 2010 at 08:39pm
  • Haha how embarrassing for both of them lol
    Loved the update....they have to hook up!
    How could she resist him after working out with him?!
    December 12th, 2010 at 07:02pm
  • first thought when i saw the title of this chapter: sex.

    “Secret Sega fan.”
    hahahaha yesssss.. super sega!!!

    “Hush you big wuss, besides, if you win, we can get some buffalo wild wings!”
    BDUBS!!!!

    “And don’t let me forget the cookies in the back for Patrice.”
    uhhh ohhh.. sega is gonna be sad/angry/jealous sega

    He was young and baby-faced and more often than not fumbled over his words.
    ohhh ty ty... it's okay! i think you're adorable <3 anna does to!

    “But you can’t be obvious, okay? I don’t want to be that guy.” He insisted.
    LOL!!!!!! TYLER! TAKE ME TO SEE KTANG! okay -.- but don't be obnoxious

    “In and out.” He reminded her to breathe at just the moment Kris Letang entered the hall as well in an outfit mainly consisting of spandex.
    HOLY SEX!!!!

    “Oh my God I think he heard me!” She squealed embarrassedly, burying her face into his shoulder as he laughed loudly. “I can’t believe that just happened!”
    AHAHHAAHHAHAHA THIS IS SOOOOO ADORABLE!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3!!!!

    Brianna laughed upon seeing Milan and Patrice gorging themselves on cookies as they entered the lounge.
    okay.. do you mean anna?? because if you do I just laughed really really loud :D

    He was going home with the girl, and that’s what really counted.
    RAWR! sexy sega gets girl :D

    “I think there’s a women’s bathroom over there you can change in.” He pointed down the hall. “I’ll meet you in there.”
    for a second i totally thought he said he would meet her in the bathroom. i was like WHOAAA!!!! SUPER SEGA SLOOOWWWW IT DOOOWWWWN. (but only because bathroom sex reminds me of germs)

    Tyler kept his eyes trained on himself in the mirror, knowing that if he let his eyes wander to his friend, there would be a big, apparent problem in his basketball shorts.
    first of all, BIG problem :D :D :D hahahahahaha second of all, poor segs just needs to get laid :p

    She instructed, watching as she folded over the space between them, her face hovering near his crotch.Tyler worried that at this moment his hormones would get the best of him and surely give him the ultimate embarrassment. There was hardly a thing he could do to control himself.
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! *DIES* OHMYGOD! HAHAHAHA THAT WOULD BE SO EMBARRASSING!!!

    Tyler was looking less and less like a little boy and more like a man.
    YES :D GET ON THAT GIRL!!!

    She asked, knowing that it would feel like heaven to cuddle up on the couch and relax.
    i would just about die to cuddle with that hot sex on my couch. rawr. seriously, she needs to start tapping that. it isn't even fair that she has all of his attention and then never does anything productive with it!

    Meanwhile, Anna let herself into his condo
    OH NO! OHHHHHH NOOO!!!!!!!! O.O O.O O.O!!!!!!! OHHHHHHH TY!!!!!!!!

    *INSERT BRIANNA LAUGHING SO HARD SHE'S DYING* HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
    OHHHH MY GOOODDD!!!!!!!!!!!! *DIES* HOW IS HE GOING TO LIVE AFTER THIS!?!?!

    Tyler wanted to crawl into his own body and dissolve. Had she heard him? Was he loud?
    >.< hahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    okay. sorry.
    but after that, i think anna should really think about that and be like.. ohh maybe i really am torturing him!
    CHRIST! that was hilarious though... oh my god sooo funny
    gotta love it :D :D :D :D
    this was great love love love loved it times a million.
    i want you to update this everyday but i get that finals are going to take you out of my life soon :( :(
    hopefully you'll take breaks and write anna and ty boinking :D
    it needs to happen soon. I can't watch him suffer anymore! just let him have her :p
    more soon?? thanks :D
    December 12th, 2010 at 05:44pm
  • haha if they don't hook up you will have many frustrated readers so much is sure :D

    my favorite line:
    Tyler was looking less and less like a little boy and more like a man.
    because it's true! :D
    December 12th, 2010 at 02:59pm
  • It's so ironic that you would update your Bruins story after I come back from a Providence Bruins game ( where I got yelled at for cheering for them)
    hahah oh my gosh pooooor Ty' that must be soooo embarassing! They seriously need to hook up soooooon!
    <3
    December 12th, 2010 at 01:44pm